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Old 12-08-2008   #1
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I remember a time when we
remember a time when we sat alone
like time we chose to reveal our secrets
our sins we could atone.

Like time we chose to reveal our secrets
bringing with them a slowing storm,
a slowing storm with vicious tongue
giving our sins the time to mourn.

A slowing storm with vicious tonugue
a voice that reads like your note,
a daughter whose only chance at love
is lost within an anecdote.

A daughter whose only chance at love
is lost within your storm,
she finds your note and with her voice
through her your sins can mourn.

She finds your note and with her voice
shouting out at me among the crowd,
I begin to remember a time when i
remember a time when to her i bowed.
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Sweet poem, is it to someone special?
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ok if Im reading it right. It sound to me like a note was found that shouldn't have been and it has made her very sad. Am I right or do I need to hush.
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Nice job. I enjoyed this.
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ok if Im reading it right. It sound to me like a note was found that shouldn't have been and it has made her very sad. Am I right or do I need to hush.
Nope, thats not it. :P
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NICE!!! waste ..i really enjoyed it... and to me it seems like something was revealed and suddenly caused trouble ... THANK YOU!!!! :D.. you are really great girl..and you kow it ^_6
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I thought that was really really good. I wish I was good a poetry, but I'm really clumsy when it comes to stuff like that. altho I'm pretty good at adventure stores. But I digress, super poem.
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I must say that this is one of the best poems I read here on AF. Especially, I like the rhythm and repetition.
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Hm tyvm spirit.
I wasn;t too sure at first..
well its basically about this girl (the daughter) who cheats on her boyfriend and 'I' find out and tell him and he writes a note to the daughter, at the end she confronts 'me' and puts me in my place. lol. And the repition basically shows that this isnt the first time it has happened.
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NICE!!! waste ..i really enjoyed it... and to me it seems like something was revealed and suddenly caused trouble ... THANK YOU!!!! :D.. you are really great girl..and you kow it ^_6

lol i agree

(waste is a girl)? <======neva knew dat
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