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Old 12-08-2008   #1
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Smile don't forget to breath....



I laugh ...oh what a deep breath ... i take ...if i had this day to consume everything i'm about to mention this is how i'll take it ........

To the grave ...an far faraway spirited spirited away ... soaring without wings piercing through highs in clear what i don't see ... i breath so deep i can't think i can't forget i must hold each moment .....

Wake up .....last night she said .." i like you ..arh " she grabs on ... kissin cheeks loving me .. she continues "i can't like you "..she smiles ..."ooh" (she laughs ).. but i think.. i ... i do do LOve you ...especially dis way"

Oh have i fallen or am i drowning ...love is bla.. but can i ... can i really trust if i must ....you see ..this feeling is burning inside me
inside of me
its bleeding
this feeling is hurting

Sphere of eternity ... Gravity under my feet .... reality of dreams

My soul would love to melt into yours
in between your heart an soul .... you are my girl
do i or should i ...let her know ... flowers push up ... candies and woop ups hey .. i'll ask you again ... it hasn't stop since it began to rain ...i don't understand .... but i LOve you ...."dis poem is not finish "
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Old 12-09-2008   #2
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Wow.... thats just sad.
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My eyes hurt just trying to read it.
Repost or edit it to something legible!
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Old 12-16-2008   #4
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My eyes hurt just trying to read it.
Repost or edit it to something legible!
i wouldn;t put it dat way O.O...
just u need sum work.....
but the idea is pretty gud i guess
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Old 12-16-2008   #5
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thts not bad... just make a few adjustments and ull be fine..
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thanks ...so i need work or something ...
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Not bad, but its a bit difficult to read it.

Try typing
more like
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