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Help!
ok, my friends jessica needs help on her poem thingy and she is wondering if u guys could help her....and could write wat u think about the poem or if it needs to get fixed in anyway.......soo ya have fun
(btw) she is 9 and ir ead da poem and thought it was pretty gud for her but i also want to know wat u guys think too. title:seasons spring is when flowers grow tall winter is when they all fall fall is when leaves go brown but summer is when u can here their sound
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PRETTY GOOD I'M NO EXPERT ThOUGH. If you want inspiration,look at stanmarshes poetry!!!!!!!
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Why does she need to write poetry at 9?
But anyway, it's not a bad poem, but it's not really exceptional either. Have her read older poetry works so she can get an idea of how others write, not just how she writes.
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It pleases the mouth with the easy rhymes but doesn't have that much imagery or mood.
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quietchat: well she likes to rhyme stuff and her "teacher" told her she "could" write a poem for the "show and tell" so yeah..not sure y she actually did it but she did -.-
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