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Old 11-09-2008   #1
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As the clouds roll by a purple sky
A lone creature catches my eye.
It's large colorful wings are fluttering
As they bring a gentle hope to my heart.
The creature, a butterfly, flies high...
Until it is plucked out of the sky
By a hungry mother bird.
I stare as sadness returns,
"How unfair," I think
"That one must die for another to live"
But that is they way of the world
And it is inevitable...
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Nice Poem Jyuu makes a person think.
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thnx. I haven't written a poem in about 2 years, I'm a bit rusty but it'll wear off hopefully
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jyuu!!! nice work!!! it flows, the rhyme scheme is there. <3 it!
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Nice! xD I like this one lol, it is sad, but true.
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This is a beautiful poem!
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Thank you all. I'm waiting on the inspiration for my next installment...
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thats really good n as Miki said it is sad but it is still true but its really good keep it up
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nice bro it really makes u stop n think ya kno

i enjoyed it alot
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UR POEM IS SO STRONG IN A SENCE....ITS TRU how birds-people do things to each other that r to sad to commit ever for ur self....i give that poem infinite thumbs up if thats even possible....
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