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Old 10-24-2008   #1
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Default Yay Im a pessimist!

Wrote this randomly one day lol
can I get some opinions? thanks =]

Endowed with destruction
drowning in sorrow
we seek what we need
forget what we have

Cruelty we gain,
hatred we obtained
tattered and listless,
infinity awaits are morality.

As darkness manifests
incurring itself
entitled to opinion,
I say death to myself.

Till deaths dying breadth
the finality of the gates
we stand before judgment,
our paths bathed in darkness.

If only we knew
what lay ahead
we would never lead
our paths astray.

Always running,
from that which we fear
summoned with terror,
inside ourselves.

But the world, all just torment
filled with nothing but lies
brutality incarnate
yes, this is our lives.
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Old 10-24-2008   #2
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yes its true...dis world is full of lies but ders a reason behind it...great poem!!! keep it up...^_^
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i have chosen my path it is the road of darkness were no one can ever get in...unlocked by its chains with hollow emptiness...
life is all about to live and die...
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WOW!! awesome piece
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hey awesome poem it's so true man... Your good keep it up dude.
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It was you...'Twas always you
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By beauty... never ended.

If Helena launched a thousand ships
And ruled a dynasty
Then a thousand times I've kissed your lips
And tasted ecstasy.

It was you...'Twas always you
With your love so pure...and yet
'Twas a love not meant to last
Our sun at last had set.

I lived awhile and loved awhile
In a world that gave me you
My loss shall not diminish
The love that once we knew
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wow, deep stuff. good job!
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Nice one. The endowed with destruction line was my favorite.
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*snaps fingers*
You earned your emo status with this poem
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Does that come with a certificate as well, Jyuukai?
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nice poem. it really expresses your view of the world as your currently see it.
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Haha, that could easily be interpreted to be "mocking" towards pessimism/emo. Although I doubt that's what you were getting across, it's how I'd like to interpret it to myself.

"Yay Im a pessimist! "

That title is what made me think it, since the first word is ironic to the last. In any case, good read. I laughed.
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