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10-08-2008
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Location: houston, texas
Age: 18
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Without you
hey guys, i wrote this song after a test i finished today and i needed something to do. so i wrote this. at first i had trouble writing it out but instead of making it a poem i began to sing it in my head and the words came flowing out. hope u like it ^^ p.s its heavy metal/rock cause its a sad and angry song so heavy metal seemed to fit with the words and when u see it soften and holding a note or the music turning from soft rock to heavy metal again then that outta tell u i imagined the music in my head. the singer is female of course. the background singers r male and r also the ones who play the guitar and the drums. electric guitars btw!! whoo hoo!!! (lol)
Genre: Rock/heavy metal Writer: Susana (A.K.A nekochan) Name: Without you I sink into the depths of the ocean. My heart as cold as snow. The one thing I love.. is gone!!!! Nothing to hold me.. onto the ground!!!!! So I sink into the shadows of the sea. I have lost myself!!! He has gone away!!! I can't keep it in, inside my deep and broken heart!!! There's no such thing as a happily ever after!!! Life and love mean nothing to me without him!!!! I don't wanna try! Don't wanna try! Don't wanna try without him!! One chance and now it's gone! A whirlpool of emotions!! Hate, fear, anger within my heart!!! Despair to keep myself from coming apart, until I lose myself!!! What's the point of going on without him?!?! I hold a gun to my head! Fear filling my head! Why can't I just be gone!! (music softens into rock) Why can't I do it? Is it the other one? the friend who loves me so... but I don't feel the same. (soft rock turns back to heavy metal) I don't love him, NO!! Why can't i just be gone?!?! Now he fills my my mind. Delays the death I've planned ahead!!! No, get out right now!!! My dear old friend!!!! (music softens to soft rock) My dear Angel... just go away... don't come so close... (soft rock to heavy metal) Just go away!!! Get out of my head!!! You cannot heal my deep and broken heart!!!! (note holds for 8 seconds) (music softens to soft rock) But maybe with you, my sweet Angel... I can try once more... You fill my hollow heart... I give you all... my entire being... Even without him.... I'll live again.... (note holds for 10 seconds and fades away with the music) hope you liked it!! ^^ 
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Location: The oldest city in the world
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i do like it , ita pretty good
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Location: In a land far far away where.. yah.
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Omgash. I feel like singing it. i bet if you made a beat to it with like Acoustica Mixcraft it would sound AWESOME! it has really good lyrics. You should become famous so i can hear you sing it. :D
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10-09-2008
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Location: helston/cornwall
Age: 21
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lol its well good
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Location: In your dreams
Age: 31
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I really enjoyed that, thank you for sharing.
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Location: In a box, with some socks, that guys mom just got some botox.
Age: 20
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nice job Neko :)
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Location: ...in our house!,.
Age: 22
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...*claps three times*
nice one!,.i like it!,.♥
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10-10-2008
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Location: Las Noches.
Age: 23
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When I read your song, I just felt like screaming these lyrics.
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