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10-07-2008
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Location: Mars
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My Sweet Rotten Darling
In french it was a rhyming poem, now I can't translate it into rhymes so.. it's an unrhyming poem I guess.
My Sweet Rotten Darling You’re so pretty, or at least you were I must admit that you scare me a bit now With all these wounds and shreds of flesh It’s streaming everywhere, it’s spraying from your heart I’d love to hold you in my arms But getting close would be fatal Anyway you don’t even have arms You’re just staring at me with your eternal, empty eyes And in your cage you grunt, you moan You’d like to get out for some fresh air Or fresh meat? Oh how I’d love to kiss you again But how could I? You lost your lips Your face is all decomposed And your jaw just fell apart! My Mama told me so "Find a real girlfriend, and dump that zombie!" But I couldn’t resist, you always attracted me Since the night I saw you, eating that terrified man I walked to you, said "hey" You said "gnhhshfffgnnn" and threw up on me Noticing at my feet these chewed organs It was my turn to puke, we laughed a lot Now memories come haunting me Where are your blond curly hairs? Where the hell is your head?! Ah, it’s nothing, it just fell down I’ve started to worry a lot Our relationship is getting dangerous I never know if you’ll still love me tomorrow Or if you just want to eat my liver Many days have passed I’ve found a solution to our problematic love I can now talk to you, come closer everyday To you, my own stuffed zombie girl |
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 Big Brother
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That ending is awesome, creepy but awesome.
You are somebody I wish I went to school with.
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Haha, thanks.
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10-08-2008
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its sick dude, but yeah, awesome
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What can I say? I absolutely love this!
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Location: Michigan
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Very interesting idea behind a poem. It worked surprisingly well for being translated, although it is unfortunate that we don't get to see it with quite the "oomph" that the French original likely had.
Still, nice work. :3 |
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Location: The oldest city in the world
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its sickiningly cool ....lol
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Location: Mars
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Thanks guys, comments like these give a motivation boost for writing.
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