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Old 10-04-2008   #1
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Sitting alone a loss of feeling
Its starting to burn and my skin is peeling
you've cut me deep with your mindless hate
I'll live alone and thats my fate
living and lying
without you i'm dying
telling myself that i'm okay
that seems to be the only way
you tore my soul apart
how could you do this to my heart

-my second attempt in poetry tell me what you think
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ah i just felt just depressed just now. :(
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did you like it?
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did you like it?
it was amusing.
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i really dont care what you think i like writing poetry it makes me happy if only for a moment
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I like it. i have write some too but not this good, keep it up :)
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Sitting alone a loss of feeling
Its starting to burn and my skin is peeling
you've cut me deep with your mindless hate
I'll live alone and thats my fate
living and lying
without you i'm dying
telling myself that i'm okay
that seems to be the only way
you tore my soul apart
how could you do this to my heart
Nicely done man. This could actually be put to a pretty decent beat and make a song. It would have to be expanded on of course, but it's the start of a decent song.
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hey i like it...it's reli good...^_^
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I'm not good at thinking of lyrics to add to my poems ill try to keep them comming i really enjoy writting poetry (makes me happy)
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