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09-25-2008
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Banned Homo
Location: You don't even want to know
Age: 17
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As i lay dying
hey this is a poem i wrote tell me wat u think plz be nice
As i lay dying My eyes sore from crying I feel i lived my life in vain Yet everyday i feel this pain My life full of endless fears To much time spent on useless tears And with that my life will end I'll die alone all hate no friend |
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09-25-2008
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Location: brooklyn
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i like it it was ok
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09-26-2008
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Banned Homo
Location: You don't even want to know
Age: 17
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it was my frist attempt at poetry
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09-26-2008
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Eh, it was pretty good. The topic of death and sadness though is way overdone. Maybe if you try doing a poem over a subject that you like it might be better? just a suggestion.
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09-29-2008
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It was a decent attempt. Could use a bit of work though. And Yes... Death is an over done topic. Try something new. =]
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09-29-2008
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it was a good poem
i like it |
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09-29-2008
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Banned Homo
Location: South Africa
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stanmarsh, it's excellent a bit darkish but cool .. it's really deep ;) good work !!!
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09-29-2008
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Location: in darkness...
Age: 21
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it's nice n cool...i like it..^_^ keep it up!!
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love to watch n read anime...:    IN DARKNESS THERE'S FREEDOM...DEATH IS MY FATE... smile even in the midst of sorrows... i have chosen my path it is the road of darkness were no one can ever get in...unlocked by its chains with hollow emptiness... life is all about to live and die... |
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10-04-2008
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Banned Homo
Location: You don't even want to know
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thanks guyz :)
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10-06-2008
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Location: wherever im needed...if im needed,,,,,,or just alone for now...i guess...
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