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Old 09-23-2008   #1
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It was a warm afternoon in a lovly peaceful city that many call their home. A young girl was sitting in her last period class of the school day. She had long red hair, that came down to her waist. Her eyes were two different colors. Her left eye was a bright blue color, which her right eyes was hazel brown. Ontop of her head she had two, black furred dog ears, and she also had a black furred tail that was tipped blond. She wore a blue shirt, that was long sleved. All over the shirt it had stars that were silver colored. She also wore casual black jeans. She looked at the clock that was hanging on the front wall.

“Only ten minutes left..”

Her attention turned to the front and then to the sign on the door. The sign on the door read “Grade 12 parenting class” She let out a light sigh and then she looked up at the front to were her teacher was. She started to pack up her binder and such when suddenly the teacher stood up and walked to the front of the class. Everyone looked up and started to pay attention to what she was going to say.

“Tonight for homework you are to talk to your parents and ask them the questions on the fallowing sheet, It is not long, It is about six or seven questions long. It is also due tomorrow,” The teacher said as she walked around the classroom.

The teacher had finished handing out the papers, when suddenly the bell rang, school was now over for the day. Only one more day untill the weekend, seeing as how it was Thursday today. The students all got up, hustled and bustled out of the classroom. The girl stood up and walked out of the class room, not looking were she was going she walked right into a young guy the same as her. The guy had short blond hair that was tinted with red in it. He had blue eyes, blond furred dog ears and a blond furred tail. The girl had fallen over onto her behind from crashing into him. Her eyes looked up at him.

“Whoops, sorry Kaiza, I didn't see you there.” The girl said looking at him
“No don't worry about it, Seala,” Kaiza responded, holding out his hand to help her.

Seala took the guys hand and he pulled her up, he bend over to pick up the papers she had dropped and then gave a little laugh when he handed the papers back to him.

“Whats so funny Kaiza!!”
“Its just you are always such a Klutz.”
“Oh I am not!”
“Yes you are! Even at home you are always dropping stuff.”
“Oh be quiet!”
“Hahahahah!!”

Seala glared at Kaiza, if you haven't figured it out yet, they are fraternal twins, one is a boy and one is a girl, same age, same grade, same school, same trouble! Kaiza gave off his charming smile and then shook his head, turning to look at his sister.

“Can you please tell mom and dad that I have track and feild tonight, so I will be home late.” Kaiza said as he started to walk of.
“Sure I will.” Seala responded looking at him and then walking of.

The walk home was not that far, and it was a very peaceful walk. It was a beautiful day out. The sky was a perfect blue, with no clouds in the sky. The birds were singing a light tune, while some were bathing in the bird baths. The cool breeze blew though her hair, it felt cool and relaxing. The spring flowers were in bloom, all colors were projected thought alot of houses, creating a ray of sweet scents. She smiled as she approached her house. The house itself was fairly big but not that large. It was painted a beautiful pure white color, and it was surrounded by a nice, black fence. There was a large garden in the front, filled with all colors of flowers that would just imagine. In the back there was also a black fence, with a gate that lead to the surrounding forest area. In the backyard also there was a swimming pool with a hot tub that is separate from the pool. Like the front, the backyard also had flowers in it. There was also a balcony that was attached the mom and dads bedroom. If you were to walk or take one step on this property you would be greeted with the most wonderful calm aura, you could tell it was peaceful and filled with love.

Seala smiled and walked into the front door of their house and smiled looking around. She walked into the kitchen and smiled warmly when she saw her mother, a very beautiful young lady sitting on a chair. The mother had long, shiny red hair, with the most brightest blue eyes in the world. She had black furred dog ears, and a black furred dog tail, like Seala and Kaiza. cradled in the mothers arms was a tiny infant boy about the age of two weeks. He had blond hair and hazel brown eyes. Like the others, black ears and tail. The mother looked down at the infant and smiled with complete happiness. Seala walked over to her mother.


“Hello mom.” Seala said looking at her baby brother with a happy smile
“Hello Seala dear.” The mother responced looking at her young son.
“Mom, can you please help me with some homework?” Seala asked looking still.
“Of course, let me just put Klarson down for his nap.” The mother said standing up, walking over to a small crib in the living room. She lightly placed the youngster down in it, and draped him lightly with a blue blanket. The child was fast asleep.

Seala sat down on the couch, beside her daughter and looked at her.

“What is it you need help with.” She asked looking at her
“Well, you have to pick a song that would describe, each of the fallowing life experiences.” Seala said removing the paper from her school bag.
“Okay then ask away.” The mother smiled.

Seala first took out a purple pen and looked at the paper as she looked at the paper and at the question. She read over the questions and the instructions before she began to read out the first question.

“What song describes your birth and your childhood?” Seala asked looking at her mother.


The mother closed her eyes for a second and though about her childhood, and how painful and terrible it was. Her childhood was very painful and filled with so much torment, that rarely people live threw. She had a strong heart and strong will, with that she was able to live.

“The perfect song for my birth/childhood would have to be concrete angel – By Martina McBride” The mother said in a low voice.
“Okay, how about a moment of freedom in your life? It can be anything.” Seala said writing down the answer to the first question.

“Of course the moment of freedom in my life was when I was rescued and the song for that would be : Angel Of Mine – By Monica”

The mother looked down for a second and sighed happily. She stood up and walked over to the drawer that was in the far end of the room. She opened it up and lighly picked up a violet colored peice of cloth that had some old blood stains on it, it looked old and tattered and torn. This was a peice of cloth that she was wearing the night she was rescued...rescued from hell. She placed it back in the drawer, closed it up and then walked over to couch and sat down.

“Next Question”
“Okay mom, First time you fell in love?”
“ That is an easy one : I do cherish you – By Mark Wills” The mom said a light blush appearing on her face. “Did you know that your father was the first man I fell in love with?” She asked her daughter.
“No I never, AWWWWWWWWWWWW like SOOOOO cute!!!.” Seala squeeled letting out a girly squeel.
“Okay how about getting married?”
“I have two songs : I loved Her First By- Heartland and for my wedding song, I cant just pick one song, I was so happy the day me and your father got married. I love him so much.” She said with a happy sigh
“I though that song was for father and daughter?” Seala asked looking at her mother.
“It is, but even though my father was a total ass, even though he had a black heart and a black soul, I am sure that deep down in his very existence he had a tiny bit of goodness, I am sure he was afraid that his only child was getting married.”
“What about when Me, Kaiza, Luna and Klarson were born?”
“The same song for all of you: I will take care of you- by Amy Sky, I was so happy when I found out I was pregnant with you and your twin brother, that I was crying with happiest. We are also thankful we were blessed with two more wonderful children.”
“Last question. Family get togethers..”
“huh? What do you mean?”
“Like, when Our family, goes over to Auntie, Uncle, KC, Taliah and Ryu's house for a family event,”
“OH! Well.. hmmm Always There (From Lady and the Tramp 2) our family has become very close, since you all and your couins were born,”
“Okay I am done thank you mom,” Seala said standing up.
“You are welcome,” The mother responded.

About ten minutes later the door opened and a man walked into the house. He had blond hair and was wearing a pair of black shades. Behind those shades was a pair of hazel brown eyes, filled with love. He walked over to the the couch and sat beside his wife, and slowly wrapped his arms around her waist, pulling her onto his lap. She turned to her husband and cuddled up to him and kissed his cheek lightly. He smiled and kissed her lips deeply holding him to her. She smiled and happily returned the kiss. Seala stood up and walked away, giving her parents some privily.

“I love you my darling,” He said looking into her eyes
“I love you too, my dearest.” She said, cuddling to her love

Seala walked out of the room and turned her head to slowly look at her parents. She smiled as they embraced and kissed eachother happily. She let out a light smile and then walked upstairs to her room.

“Life really is simple yet perfect,” She thought walking into her room.

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very good. Im sure u have great inspiration
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Old 09-23-2008   #3
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long but its very nice....keep it up!!! ^_^
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OMG!!!! Very very good!!!! It drags the reader into it, and keeps them guessing every second of the way. It has just enough suspense to keep the reader guessing, and is just a very good piece. Keep up the excellent work!
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O_O Wha???? Are you all serious! =D Awesome!! I am glad you enjoy it ^.^
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OMG! So good
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Wow. I liked it alot.. I only got to read the beginning so far because im being monitored while im in class... >_>...<_<...

It really makes me feel like im watching it live. :D! Good Job! keep it up :)

(I shall read the rest once i return to my home) !!!!!!
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*yawn*

I didnt exepct anyone to die a slow, painful death, so I gave up after the first paragraph. Add a bit more color next time, will you?

Preferably the color red.
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That was such a sweet story, detailed and creative. I actually looked up those songs to listen to while I read it. Let me know if you post anymore stories. I`m looking forward to reading them
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I am glad you guys like it! of course I will post more stories!
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