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Old 09-07-2008   #1
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Eternity of Love

Coldness spreads like a disease
Running through me like a virus
Slowing down the heart rate
There’s nothing crazy about this

Red red roses blooming
Red red roses bleeding tears of joy
I feel like a fool
I don’t know what to do
Someone show me the way
To eternity of love

My heart beats in a steady rate
Burning crimson flames
My mind is lost and ravaging
My body cannot be tamed

Red red roses blooming
Red red roses bleeding tears of joy
I feel like a fool
I don’t know what to do
Someone show me the way
To eternity of love

People saw something that wasn’t there
I had thought they lost their minds
Day by day, hour by hour
I thought it became true

Red red roses blooming
Red red roses bleeding tears of joy
I feel like a fool
I don’t know what to do
Someone show me the way
To eternity of love

Searching for a soul again
Searching for the lord of time
Searching for something deep and red
Searching for something that was dead

Red red roses blooming
Red red roses bleeding tears of joy
I feel like a fool
I don’t know what to do
Someone show me the way
To eternity of love

What on earth have I done?
What should I do?
There’s no turning back now
I have fallen for you

Red red roses blooming
Red red roses bleeding tears of joy
I feel like a fool
I don’t know what to do
Someone show me the way
To eternity of love

The eternity of love….
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Old 09-17-2008   #2
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That was a great read for me...I happen to really like drama. NiceLy DoNe!!
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it's nice...i noticed posting poems r popular ryt now...i reli apprecitae pipz making poems coz i'm bad at it...
oh yeah back to ur poem i find it inspiring 2 people who r looking 4 love...nice 1!!!! i like it!!! ^_^
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...oh!,.that poem is right for me!,.hahahaha!,.♥
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very nice! Very well written and it pulls the reader into the poem right to the end. Keep up the good work!
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Nice poem, you've got great ideas. But love does not exist.
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o nice cool cool lol hey did u make that
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Nice poem, you've got great ideas. But love does not exist.
Silly Lemonek, it does as an emotion and a certin understanding. Anyway this poem is really good, great job! ^^
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