I am (its my poem that i had to write or enlish at school lol)

[runt32a]

I am an artistic and understanding person.
I wonder what else great artist I will come across in my lifetime.
I hear the amazing sounds of music all around me.
I see the magnificent works of art everyday.
I want to one-day write a song or poem as great as Beethoven’s music.
I am an artistic and understanding person.

I pretend to be back in the old days when Beethoven was alive playing one of his works of arts.
I feel truly alive when I hear amazing music like his.
I touch the wonderful interments of the past and today’s world.
I worry that not all the great works of art will be known if not remembered in the future.
I cry when all is forgotten.
I am an artist and understanding person.

I understand what other people often mean when they speak.
I say, “it’s not about what your talent is, it’s about what you do with it”.
I dream of feeling true freedom the way I feel music all around me.
I try to understand something or someone a bit more each day.
I hope that one day my purpose in life won’t be a mystery to me.
I am an artistic and understanding person.

my enlish teacher is makin it where it had to be positive to pass so thats y its not as deep n sad like i guess like my other poems lol

[saprintha]

oh wow, my brother had to write a poem exactly like that when he first came into high school this year. and yes very positive,and yet it has this "beautiful" kind of feeling when i read it. good job. it should get an A.

[runt32a]

lol it took me a bit longer to write cause of it havin to be positive n thats

[athrun0017]

wow.. i can be honest and say that that poem, does suit you, i like it.. and it was a bit positive. *smiles*.. but thats because your a artistic and understanding person.. right?

[BlueSano]

wow ..very nice ^^...i haven't read your work before ...but it is positive ^^
good job

[Inulove17]

Wow.. that was really good! Great job, very positive!

[FoX66]

Oh dear... I can't write a happy poem, i just can't.

This is good. I had to do something like this last year for Tominack.

[runt32a]

Originally Posted by athrun0017

wow.. i can be honest and say that that poem, does suit you, i like it.. and it was a bit positive. *smiles*.. but thats because your a artistic and understanding person.. right?

ahahahahahahahahahaha no its positive cause my english teacher says that it has to be in order to pass for da fact that its a test grade lol

[runt32a]

Originally Posted by BlueSano

wow ..very nice ^^...i haven't read your work before ...but it is positive ^^
good job

um my poems arn't normaly that positive its more sad n deep unless its for school or something that makes me want to write a positive poem but my songs are more inspirational n positive i would think or i try to make em some what like that lol

[runt32a]

Originally Posted by FoX66

Oh dear... I can't write a happy poem, i just can't.

This is good. I had to do something like this last year for Tominack.

um i know what you mean it took me longer to write this one for it having to be positive then it normaly takes me to write my other ones lol