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Old 09-01-2008   #1
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Default Looking For My Reflection

Staring into the water,
There is nothing there but black,
I have no reflection,
I will not be back,

Faces swirl around,
I stare into peoples eyes,
Stop it I must not look,
They peel away the lies,

Nothing was being kind,
The reality is worse,
I can not look away,
I can't escape this curse,

The black is swirling,
Slowly fading away,
Although I did not desire it,
I desparatly want it to stay,

Its uncovering a face,
Dark red like blood,
Greeneyes almost black,
I scramble on the mud,

Fire around its head,
Dark evil in its eyes,
Clawing its way out,
I much prfered the lies,

Smileing an evil grin,
Glowing white teeth revealed,
How can I push it back,
Into the chamber it was sealed,

A demon in my heart,
This is the real me,
I finally view my reflection,
Which I dont want to see,

It creeps up the bank,
Slipping its claws around my heart,
Ice cold burning pain,
Tearing me apart,

As I writhe in agony,
It steals my very soul,
Claiming for its own,
Its eyes a fire of coal,

Suddenly it's in control,
Through its eyes I see the lake,
My face stares up at me,
I hope I'm not awake,

Now I see my reflection,
I see it mirrored in me,
Its taken over,
Now I'm history,

Get it out of here,
I much prefered the deciet,
I made a mistake,
This demon I did not want to meet,

I'm slipping out of reality,
The pains fading away,
I'm floating from my body,
From the lake I watch it walk away.
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Dark...I like it, it was gripping.
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thats amazing nice n dark n evil i love it
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