Faded Dreamland

[Amai-hime]

The world spins round and round,
We don’t seem to realize
That we’re upside down,
I listen to the lullaby that...
The clouds drag across the sky
And read the stories in my dreams,
That the purple sky tries to hide.
The clouds aren’t cotton candy,
But just fluff wasting away...
And sometimes,
In solitude,
We seem to fade into gray.

[ELIE]

thats a nice lullaby

[Amai-hime]

Thank you. ^-^ I wrote it around six o'clock in the morning. lol.

[Waste]

Thats really cool.
reads a bit like a song.
I write some of my best stuff at ridiculous times as well...

[Amai-hime]

Thanks. lol. And yes, I think all writers know the feeling of somehow accomplishing hard work at odd hours. I once wrote an amazing story past midnight. lol. It was amazing because it actually made sense.

[Orangeii]

i luved it thnx for sharing it ^^

[Maydraie]

hmm...I would sing that song while slaughtering a village. hmmm...seems i'm following after Richard the Warlocks steps...

[soulten]

It's a nice poem...better than most i've seen from people who are 16...a lot better.

[Amai-hime]

Aw, thanks soulten. Nice avi btw. AND THANK YOU EVERYONE!
Or,
~Doomo Arigatou Gozaimasu!~

[athrun0017]

Originally Posted by Amai-hime

Thank you. ^-^ I wrote it around six o'clock in the morning. lol.

alot could be running through your mind at that time, perhaps thats how you managed to get that lil' poem pack a huge punch! (if you know what i mean) ... i like it!