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Old 06-30-2008   #1
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Your words are something more
Than I can comprehend
It's all because of you
That my choice is at its end

You say you love me so
Still, yet you tend to hide
I'm lost by your repressed choices.
Is it your unsolved pride?

At last my dearest lover,
I've found your blossoming secret
And though it may be tempting
I swear to you I'll keep it
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That's really good, great job. 8D
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Thanks :D Glad you liked it.
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I'm not really into poetry but i think you done a great job
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Why thank you 8D
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The poem feels like its thoughts are accelerating. I like how it was structure/made like that.
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Did you just make it up for no reason, or has something in your life influenced you to do a great poem like this? :)
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Poems just come to me. :3 I wanted to write something, and this was the outcome. Most of the time, my mood will affect the poem I write, like if I'm sad, it'll be depressing, etc.

I'm really glad you liked it though. 8D You can read my other poems on here. They're all though this section.
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im not much of a fan of poetry, but dang, you did a good job! when you say that it just comes to you, do you mean off the top of your head?
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Yes. :3 If I want to write, something just pops into my head and I put it on paper and try as best as I can to make it just as good as the initial thought.

Thank you, though. n___n
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