its gonna be a manga

[sparkrose]

no name yet please offer suggestions after i put up the third part
ummm i hope this speaks for itself its the plot im working on for a manga it starts here and now in the good old usa of summer 2008. theres this boy whos is striving to have a life like an anime. please tell me what you think.

setting:room
watching anime on computer

*sound of washing machine in background*
Main: "naru~chan kawaii de i wish i was that lucky bastard dam him!!!"
Mom:*from afar* dinner time!!!!
Main: kay! * runs over*

setting: at the dinner table

Dad: your moms picking tommorow at 5
Main: yungh
Mom: you know you should eat more greens
Main: *eats one string bean* *throws out food and paper plate**starts walking to room*
Dad: wait
Main: *stops and faces him* eh?
Dad: didnt you and your friends plan anything for summer?
Main: well anime Expo is over and i dont think any of us have the will to plan anything past a month.....
Dad *disapointed* all right you can go now but dont stay on the computer to long its bad for your eyes.
Main: kay

*goes back to room and watches anime late into the night*
*stops suddenly*
*goes to bed*
*notices that its getting brighter*

Main: ahh its the sun rise

*watches sunrise*

Main: i wish i could live in japan

[Unknown]

"A typical life of a weeaboo"
Thats my suggestion or just "Weeaboo"
Thats how the story is sounding to me.

Word of advice- either make it in all English or Japanese.
Do not add kawaii, baka, desu, onii-chan, onee-chan etc.
When the dialogue is in English.

[sparkrose]

Originally Posted by Unknown

"A typical life of a weeaboo"
Thats my suggestion or just "Weeaboo"
Thats how the story is sounding to me.

Word of advice- either make it in all English or Japanese.
Do not add kawaii, baka, desu, onii-chan, onee-chan etc.
When the dialogue is in English.

he actually says those words hes actually meshing together a whole bunch of languages into his own theres a reason for this which will be there soon

[sparkrose]

Main: i have a wierd train of thought.... oh well! *goes to sleep*

1 hour later

Main: the sun so hot i want a cute classmate to wake me up in the morning *falls back asleep*

lunch time

Main: *still alseep*

a bit later

Main: *wakes up*that was a good sleep
im hungry....*moves* im to hungry to move....
food~~~~~ *sleeps again*

10 minutes later

Main: milk milk i love milk *goes to get milk*
Mom: your moms here to pick you up!
Main: *hugs mom* bye
*walks over to car*
Main: *hugs mom* hi mommy i missed you
Mom): me to

*drives to other house*

Main: anyone over?
Mom): yea everyones swimming
Main: cool *changes*
Main: oi! *jumps into the pool*

swimming swimming swimming
Main: *gets out*

*goes straight to computer*

another anime all nighter
Mains thoughts while watching:
hahahahaha
***-chan!! i want to be there
DE-KEY-DA, dekeka, dekeda?, dekeda!
i should learn how to read japanese first...
oh well i know at least one symbol
click paste save
i finished the series already
time for bed
whats this a season 2
hahahahahahahahaha
i wish my life was like that
hahaha
if i went to japan it might happen

7 o'clock

Main: oh look another sunset
*gets up to watch*
Main: if only i had a cool robe that flows in the wind
i could stand out there looking all cool
*notices someone doing just that*
............
........................
.................................
!!!!

*house blows up*

[illuma]

This is kinda weird, but i'm thinking its ok so far. I don't really mind the mix of language since it don't really matter.

[Unknown]

^Only a weeaboo would say that.

Originally Posted by sparkrose

he actually says those words hes actually meshing together a whole bunch of languages into his own theres a reason for this which will be there soon

Ok, looking forward to it.

　　　

[Rincewind]

Sounds interesting :D , might we get a longer preview :O?

[Mugen]

Have you got names for your characters? Pretty cool so far.

[moffetto]

interesting looking forward to the rest

[moffetto]

haha i just did that its just after sun rise