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Location: Room 409
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The Blood On The Floor
Theres now nothing left but the blood on the floor.
No girl in her bedroom, just a note on the door. No more phony smile, no more wiping tears. No more laying awake caught up by her fears. No more fighting with her, no messages of hate. No reason to run away from her, or be afraid. No more girl walking round so sad and forlorn. Theres now nothing left but the blood on the floor. No reason now not to *****, spread the rumors at will. But she knew all along, it helped her take the pills. Theres now nothing left but the blood on the floor. No pain left to fill a heart that needed a little more. A little more love. Maybe a friend or two extra. A little bit of hope, someone to stand next to her. A little bit of faith, more time to breathe. A little more truth and a reason to believe. Theres now nothing left but a cold lonely grave, & a poem she wrote of a teen can't be saved. Theres now nothing left but a dead empty room. The curtains are drawn, in there her pain looms. Theres now nothing left but the blood on the floor, They just can't erase all that they saw. Haunted in their dreams, by the screams they never heard. And chased by the guilt that it wasn't suicide it was murder.
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I like it keep up the good work
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Location: baltimore
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I am amazed i loved that. I dont know what else to say it was dark and at the same time had me thinking about stuff. I hope you right some more stuff so i can read it.
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Location: Arizona
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Bravo truly a work of art. whether its your drawings or your poetry you can do it all. Now i must say that even though this is a bit depressing the level of how you write and the imagery are truly skilled. I will be waiting for your next work of splendor.
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Location: Earth
Age: 22
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This, to me, is about giving up when all is said and done because it's tragic and it's what you thrive on. Ending it all not because of thoughts and events that take place in the typical teenage mind but for actual practical reasons as a sort of revenge on everyone who has ever wronged you. A sorrow for ones self.
-Jack
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That was beautiful. I really have to say it almost brought tears to my eyes. Keep posting those poems. You're very very good.
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Location: Andromeda
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you should maka a threa and put your poetry there, it would be popular very quikly
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