Awaken, Beloved

[Ariya]

Master…
Your unloved wish is but
Unholy raw passion,
A hardhearted form of salvation,
In which I have yet to understand

My Master lives dreary,
Drunken with shrouded desires
That a dank rose like I,
Your devotee, cannot,
Yet, be situated with

Reach out, my adored one,
For I am not yet what my
Master can be content to
But it is I,
Your silent overseer,
Who shall heal you,
From your fruitless sleep

From your powerless struggle,
For that world that is not there,
Where blooms not
One lone rose,
And memoirs of
A fervent servant…
Who's soul at least
A sinister solace had
Incarcerated your taken heart

[archangle]

hmmmmm.......

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[epoc]

It feels abit like it has to do with vampires or someother supernatural beings :D

still Pretty good ^^

[Rock]

It's really cute one Ariya, really nice one(surrounded by mystic mist)
Well for me create such wonderful piece of art its pretty much impossible(since my english suck) but nothing comes best from begining does it..

I really enjoyed this on, ill chek other ones as well, hope they will be in same cool manner :P

[Jack]

My interpretation:

You have a faith that is no longer steadfast. You're questioning a belief or beliefs. Swelling and growing emotions and thoughts of a doubtful nature. You want to go against something that you've been taught.

What this means to me, personally, is related to the thoughts I've been having lately about my religion, Christianity. Like every mentally stimulated individual, I'm questioning whether or not all of this is real. I find myself becoming ambitious, rebellious and adventurous. So for now I'm searching things out and filling the gap of safety and loneliness with another person, anyone really, as long they make me feel secure. But my jaded outlook and past experiences won't allow me to just open up. So I become confused, then angry and finally I give up and stop caring. It's almost a vicious circle at times.

That's what your creation made me think of.

-Jack

[jamjfly]

I am at a loss for words again. Another wonderful poem. I loved it!