the first chapter...the intro of 3rd full moon

[sapphireAT]

Intro

The Weeping Willow trees sway in the midnight breeze as the red full moon above lights up the park. Stars shine brightly in the darkening sky; watching the scenery below as you hear footsteps thumping down the sidewalk. It was a girl…she’s running from something it seems. She holds onto the blue rose that Riion Kakizima gave her earlier that evening for her 18th birthday. The first pedal falls and the girl known as Saki Monogukii winces with pain and fear. Perspiration starts to drip from the corners of her blue eyes: her red hair flowing behind her as she continues to run. A root from a tree stopped her from going any further and she falls to the ground, dropping the rose. She looks back as a middle-aged male leaps into the air about ten feet off the ground. Saki quickly grabs the rose and the male landed on top of her making her scream with her eyes tightly shut.

“Let me go, you fiend!” she exclaimed.

“Not without a bite.”

He drew himself forward toward her neck when a strange light blocked his fangs and he flew off of her. Her eyes grew widely and looked down at the blue rose: it was glowing and pulsating at the same beat as her own heart. What kind of trickery is this? Is this rose magical? But magic is not real, she thought. She looked back at the man standing a few feet away from her. He licked the side of his hand and flung himself at her once more. The same light flashed when she held out the rose and he bounced off.

Why can’t I bite her? He asked himself. That light repels me.

“Find your true love, Saki. Only he could free me”, said a voice from within the girl.

What, she asked herself.

Free me!

Saki got up from the slated ground and ran, huffing and panting as she went. The man cried from behind and she looked back. He’s gone! When she looked forward again he appeared.

“You’re not going anywhere. You’re coming with me, wench!”

He grabbed a hold of her wrist and she twisted and struggled to get free, but the grasp was too tight for her to get loose. Before she could do anything else, he leapt into the air holding onto her and they flew across Tokyo, Japan. Over trees and buildings: seeing the lights blend in together as they pick up speed. The rush of it all made her faint.

[athrun0017]

I wonder why that voice needs your true love to set it free? "that story is awesome!!" I like it! can't wait for chapter 2

[epoc]

you know what... i wont even read chapter 2...

i'll wait for the story to be finnished! Then i will read it :D it's really good i must say ^_^

[strike7785]

Very good I agree