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Old 11-27-2009   #1
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We're All Just Human



Sibbling are ranked

Races are hated

This is America

When will it end



We're all human

Some may be mature

And some may be imature

Some may be wise

And some may be discovering life



Why would age matter in everything

Other then crossing lines

When it's just numbers

Why would believe's matter

When it's just part of someone's morals

Why would race matter

When it's just the color of their skin



Why are we ranked

On who's better then who

When in the end we're all just human

When will everyone see we're all equal

When it comes to the fact that we're all just human



Some are suicidal emo and goth

When some are preppy jock and invisable to sociaty

Some are punk rock and metal

When some are dance country and poetic

Some are nerds geeks and science freaks

When in the end we're all just human

Trying to fit in



When will the

Racism gangs rankings and all that end

This is America

The country known for its freedom

So when will everyone see

We're all just human
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Hmmmm.........I like the ides for it but I can't really say that I loved how you wrote it. Try using stronger wordings and Try editing the flow of the words.


"Some are suicidal emo and goth

When some are preppy jock and invisable to sociaty

Some are punk rock and metal

When some are dance country and poetic

Some are nerds geeks and science freaks

When in the end we're all just human

Trying to fit in"


I didn't really like this because of the way you described the social groups.....Maybe try find easier terms or just cut that all together :P Sorry if I'm sounding harsh ^.^ I really do like it and this is just my opinion based of my own style So do whatever you feel you should do :P
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not bad br you speak some truth my friend
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thanks guys and i understand that verse was hard to come up with anyways lol no hard feelings
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