Silent Howl

[WolfLupus]

( This Poem I created, in a preparation for a story I created, not that I believe it turned out the best I could, of now, but my wandering side of a wolf fills this..., only feel this poem not the actual story fulfills my sight)

The sinking moon floats on the horizons
Pure crystals of gold hovering, midst it, in the clear blue sky
Their light shining, on the snowy caps
Glistening down, into the blazing valleys
Long cries of overwhelmed pain, anger, and sadness
Within thy blaze, hover these cries
A single L’Arc lost one, their hidden hunter, stained and burned with flaming soot upon his crystalline colored self, whilst the red-whiteness burns
The cries reaching to the crest of the L’Arc Mountain, falling upon deaf ears of brothers and sisters, as the clans wage their war with the Hadoken Clan
The ground shakes, crumbles, with the menace of the clans
The stained one, attempts to continue only to fall, with the opening of deep rifts within the ground, changing the slope, and moving hard black boulders
This one falls before one such boulder, and stumbles tumbling backwards down the abyssal mountain
Fortune shines upon this one, though, for he lands on the shores beside the dismal-turquoise-sea-lake
Where thy lays, the water lapping at his sides, protected from the burning further


~Man’rir Zentair
2nd follower of the shallow Qauvir
The 9th age of Shadowed Moon
( Suggestions for a making/ enhancing of this, or a much better title, widely accepted and wished, if you wish to name anything, say it)

[wi_sam]

I have no suggestions, except maybe you should try to rearrange it. Cause some lines are just too long. But overall I think it's nice :)

[alleon20]

I agree to and also keep writing.