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Old 05-13-2009   #1
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I woke to find myself in the cave. I looked for the food and was relived to find it right where I put it. Apparently, nothing had come into the cave while I slept. I got out of my sleeping bag and faced a problem. "How do I turn it back into a bag?" I thought. An idea came to me. If the symbol made it transform. Perhaps it can reverse the process. I touched the Zien symbol and, I was right. It glowed red. I repeated the movements and the symbol turned from red to yellow. Then, as I finished, I heard something behind me. It was faint, but I heard. I froze. "What made the noise? Dare I look back to see for myself?" I asked myself. Then, a voice. " Why are you in here?" asked the voice. I guessed it was female as it had a high pitch.I turned to see the person that spoke. I was right, that person was female. Her hair was past her thighs. Also, it was a rich red color. Her eyes were also red. She wore clothing of which I had never seen. It was like a chainmail but it wasn't metal. It glowed with the same red color as her eyes and hair. She wore leggings which were also red. I quickly stoped scaning her and responded." I'm just a traveler who slept in this cave for the night." The female looked at me stright in the eyes and then said, " Where are you going?" " I am going to a place called Terian." I said. " Terian?" said the female. " I'm from Terian" she added. " Really?" I quickly said. If she was from Terian, then she could lead me to it. " Yea, it's not far from here." she said. Excellant, now I just needed to get here to take me there. Apparently, that required none of my effort as she said,"Come on. I'll take you there." Yes! My luck really had me this time. " Ok. Lead the way." I said with a grin.

I turned the bag back into it's origanal shape and put my supplies in it. Then, I followed the female out of the cave. " What's your name?" She asked me. " I have no name." I said. " No name!" She said astonished. " Well, fine, I'm Nia" she added. " Nia...nice name" I said. " Thanks." She said. Then, she giggled. I looked at her. Was she safe to be around? I thought about going on my own but then, I saw that there was no reason to. Why? Because she had no weapon on her. If anything, I figured she was a scout. " Why are you out here?" I asked. " I'm hunting." She responed. Hunting! Maybe she wasn't a scout. " What are you hunting for?" I said I then heard a sound off to my right. It was like a low growl. I looked and then I felt a tug on my arm. Nia had grabbed me and ducked back inside the cave. " That," she said," is what I'm hunting for." " What is that thing?" I said panicking. " It's a native creature. Only found in Mysithia" she said. Then, she grinned. "Stay here" she said. She let me go and rushed out of the cave. I looked out after her. She had gone up to the creture. It growled. The creture was a wolf-like animal. It had pointed ears and large canines. However, it's eyes were different colors. I looked at Nia only to see her unphased. She took a stance and her hand glowed red. After a moment, there was a blinding red light. After the light, In Nia's hand, was and red shining sword.

I looked at it in amazment. This was magic! I could not think of any other reason to what had happened. I looked at it. Then, the creture lunged. It had not been phased in the slightest at the sword. Nia sidestepped and lunged at the wolf. The blade pierced the animal and it gave a whine. Nia then held the sword up and it disappeared in another flash of red light. I crawled out of the cave. Stunned at what had happened. Nia walked over to the dead creture and placed a hand on it. The creature was enveloped in twisting light and disappeared. I walked over to Nia. " What..." That was all I could manage. " Questions come later. Once we reach Terian." she said. Igot my act back together and said," Where is Ter..." I didn't finish because off in the distance, was a broghtly colored spot that I knew was Terian. How did I miss that? At night, that spot would have been findable even from the top of a low mountain! Then, I remembered Nia's words. Questions came later. After we reached that spot.


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I love it! Hope you write the third part soon! :)
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wow. That was fast.0.o
Also, thx. It's coming soon.
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Heheh! I'm still here! Well, my opinion hasn't changed: great story, I can hardly wait for the next chapter!
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Well, you'll have to wait. Next part Saturday....maybe I'll do 2 parts.
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Sorry for double post. Aslo, sorry for not posting. I was gonna do it on Saturday at 5:00 p.m but my computer started a scan that took till 9:00.:\
Also, Sunday, I couldn't even log on.:p Way to much stuff do that day. I'll try to post the next part after dinner today.
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Sorry for double post. Aslo, sorry for not posting. I was gonna do it on Saturday at 5:00 p.m but my computer started a scan that took till 9:00.:\
Also, Sunday, I couldn't even log on.:p Way to much stuff do that day. I'll try to post the next part after dinner today.
Don't worry about it!
Also, I don't think it counts as double-posting because your posts had such a big difference in time. You posted the second one 2 days after the previous one...
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Change of plans. Tomarrow, next post and final part. There wasn't many parts left so I decided to combine them all into one post that's gonna be out tomarrow. Hold out for just one day to see the conclusion and extremily surprising ending!

P.S. The ending is gonna leave you going...wow....wtf. I'm serious. Your not gonna expect what's to come on Tuesday.

P.S.S. This was all to make up for missed days. They will not go in vain.
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