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Old 04-20-2009   #1
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"We are eighty-one miles off the coast of England. ETA, fourteen minutes, " announced the pilot. " Guess it's time for everyone to be briefed for our mission, " Captain Byers replied. " All right, everyone listen up! Today we are wiping out the Lamia that have taken over London. Us, along with Alpha, Echo, Tango, Zulu, Charlie, Whiskey, Beta, Sierra, and Kilo team are going to each clear out a sector of London. Once done we'll head towards our rendezvous point with our helicopters so the second set of teams can clear out the rest of London. After they've cleared out the rest of the Lamia we're heading into one of the nest underneath London, " Captain Byers shouted. " But sir, why can't we just go in and wipe out all the Lamia aboveground in one clean sweep? " Asked Lieutenant Lott. " Because the new air tanks on your suits can only contain enough oxygen to last you for about four hours, " answered Captain Byers. " Cheeky little bastards don't know when to leave our suits alone, " commented Corporal Smith. " That's enough now Smith. They're just trying to make our suits better so we can live longer in the field. Or would you prefer to run ass-naked into battle? " Captain Byers remarked. " No sir... " Muttered Corporal Smith. " 7 minutes! " Shouted the pilot. " So, anymore questions or stupid remarks? " Asked Captain Byers. " Sir, what's the purpose of taking back London from the Lamia? I mean, i know it's an important city and all, but isn't this dangerous? We're going to lose a ton of soldiers against all of the Lamia infesting London. Can't we just bomb them or something? " Asked Lieutenant Oxford. " It would be so much easier that way, yes, but then we wouldn't kill even a fraction of the Lamia infesting London. That's why we have to go into their nest and plant a bomb at the center. That way, we can take out a majority of them, and close up any tunnels for the surviving Lamia, " Captain Byers replied. " In other words, we're basicaly caving London in? " Asked Private William. " That would be the plan, yes, " Answered Captian Byers. " Four minutes! " Shouted the pilot. " If no one has anymore questions let's be silent for the rest of the trip, ok? " Requested Captian Byers. " Yes sir! " Everyone shouted in return.

As the helicopter neared London the sounds of gunfire and explosions began to fill the air. Smoke and fire rose from almost every building in London as tanks fired upon hidden Lamia troops. Several Lamia troops noticed the incoming helicopters and quickly ran towards a nearby machine gun turret. The Lamia began loading the turret as they postioned it towards the helicopters. " Die Crap-bird! " Yelled one of the Lamia. The Lamia began firing upon Delta team's helicopter as it headed for its landing point. " Where the hell is that coming from?! " Shouted Captian Byers. " Up there, on the five-story building! " The pilot replied. The helicopter quickly veered in the direction of the turret, still careful to avoid it. " Permission to fire sir? " Asked the pilot. " Permission Granted, " Captian Byers answered. The helicopter's turrrets soon came to life as a barrage of bullets was released upon the attacking Lamia. One after another the Lamia began dropping after being hit multiple times. " Enemies Down! " The pilot cheered. " All right, continue towards the landing point, " Ordered Captian Byers. " Yes sir, " Answered the pilot. The helicopter quickly headed back on course towards the landing point. " Two more minutes, Sir! " shouted the pilot. " Everyone geared and ready? " Asked Captian Byers. " Yes Sir! " Answered everyone in unison. " Sir we are in reach of the la- Before the pilot could finish speaking several rockets were fire at the helicopter. " Shit! Evasive action! " Screamed the pilot as he began dodging the rocket fire. The helicopter veered left dodging one missle, then right to avoid another. A second set of missles came flying towards the helicopter. The helicpoter flew up to avoid the third one then flipped sideways to avoid the last one. " All clear sir! " Shouted the pilot. " Ok, hurry up and bring us down! " Captian Byers yelled. Just as the helicpoter was heading for the landing zone a fifth missle came flying out from one of the smaller buildings. Before the pilot had time to react the helicopter was hit and began spiraling down to Earth. " Oh shit! Brace for impact! " Screamed the pilot. Everything went dark after that.
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Old 04-20-2009   #2
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ooo i love this, keep up the good work
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Stupid lamia. Kill them all I say.
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I like it, keep it up and tell me when you make another creative writing thing.
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This story was great
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loved it !!! what the hell are those lamia !? they sound like cannabils !
 
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loved it !!! what the hell are those lamia !? they sound like cannabils !
They're supposed to be creatures that have lived underground for thousands of years and finaly surfaced, deciding to eat and kill everything that moves.
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Just as wonderful as the last one!! Keep it up!
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Very good, there is always something happening,you explain the battle very well.
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AH, damn you for leaving as cliffy! >.< These must be some very technologically advanced helicopters to be able to dodge turret fire. I so saw the missile coming. So saw it. Very nice work here, Mem. Keep it up man!
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