The Lone Fox Girl Story

[Fox Girl]

The Lone Fox Girl
The story begins in a deep dark forest where a beautiful girl lives. She was not like most girls because she was part fox. She had beautiful red hair that was very curly. Her eyes were a dark brown. She had a fox tail and ears which were both red. Her skin was fair. She lived with her parents. Both worked hard to take good care of her.
One day she went to the river to fill her empty pitcher. She sat down for a little bite. Her head lay low because she had no lover of her own. Tears began to fall down her face. She thought that she could never get a lover. Finally she went back home. She didn’t notice that there was a wolf boy watching her. He saw her beauty and long to be with her.
The fox girl went back inside her family home. She was very happy to see her family. She loved her family very much. She lay the pitcher down on the counter and she headed to bed. In her room was a big window. Her bed was nice and pretty. There were a lot of pillows on her bed. She jumps on it and started to cry. She was thinking so hard about wanting a lover that she didn’t come down to have dinner. Her mother could hear her crying and decided not to bother her.
The next day the wolf boy came down to the river and waited to see the beautiful fox girl. He was very shy and was worried he might make a mistake. Still he waited until he could see her. Finally the fox girl came down the river to get some pitcher of water. He sneaked over to see her. She turned around and saw him standing there. She moved back until her back was up against a tree. She started to shake. Normally fox and wolves don’t get along. The wolf boy picked up the pitcher and filled it back up.
Then he said, “I’m sorry here is your pitcher of water. I was wondering if we could hmm hang out.”
He started to get nervous again and didn’t know what to say. He though he was making a big mistake again. Then he turned around was going to leave when the fox girl started to talk.
She said, “It is ok. I know you didn’t mean too. My name is Fox Girl. What is yours?”
He said, “My name is Wolf boy. It is very nice to meet you.”
He gave a sweet smile but his teeth began to scare her. She thought it would be weird dating or having a lover to a wolf but she didn’t want to hurt him.
Then she asked, “Would you like to come to dinner with me? You can meet my family.”
He nodded his head yes and they both went back to her house. When they got to the house, she put the pitcher down and told her parents her new friend. Her parents were happy that she had a new friend. Even though he was a wolf boy, they didn’t seem to mind much. Then her mother started to make dinner. They all sat down at the table and started to eat. After dinner, wolf boy had to leave. He had to get home.
Fox Girl stands by the door and said, “Will I ever see you again. I hope we can meet again sometime!”
Wolf Boy looked at her and said, “Someday very soon…I’m hoping tomorrow we can hang out again. Bye for now”
He started to leave when Fox Girl came up and gave him a kiss goodbye. He was stocked but smiled for a moment. Then he went away. Fox Girl just stands there until she could see him no more. Then she went back inside the house. She would never know if she would see him again. She went on with her life. Day by day she waited from him. He never showed up. She wondered if it was all a dream. Soon it became years and her parents grow older. Then her parents had died and she was much older now. She never saw the Wolf Boy. She became more and more depressed. Finally she lay in bed and never woke up again. She was in peace but never really had a true love.
THE END

P.S. I hope you like this story and note this is sorta when I was depressed but wanted to write it down instead of sleeping. Hehehe! ENJOY! Fox Girl

[CrazyHazel]

aww so sweet but so very sad

[Fox Girl]

Thanks you! I was kind of upset with a guy I cared for and so I wrote that to make me feel some what better even if it was depressing.

[CrazyHazel]

awww i know how that feels

[Beastking]

awww how sweet! *tears*

[Alrenta]

hey thats good,
ever thought of expanding it?

[AngelKit]

Thats very good I wish I can write like this

[-.Shiki.-]

That was sweet. You should think of adding more details to it ^^
I envy you, I really suck at writing xDD [at least in english =p]

[Fox Girl]

Thanks everyone! Yeah...I haven't decided if I would write more or make it different. I like the way it is so far. If you guys want..I'm going to put up my Fox Girl story. I put part of it and tell me what you think when I put it up. Thanks so much for the comments everyone. ^^

[yoh]

this is really good better thought out then my manga but then again they are different "projects"