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A New Generation
I figured that since I posted my fanfic in my other forum that I should share it with you all here as well. This is a fanfic about Naruto and it starts off after Sasuke has killed Orochimaru but not too much farther ahead than that.
Authors Note: Just to let everyone know I wrote this just over a year ago and it was my first attempt at any sort of fanfic, or developmental writing. So the description/imagery is somewhat lacking. However, the ideas are there, and in future chapters there is significant improvement (or so I am told) so please don't be scared off early on. Anyways here you go, enjoy!
A New Dawn Breaks. Chapter 1: Old Friends, New Assignment!
“Try Harder Naruto!” Jiraiya shouted at Naruto while they were busy training to develop and complete the Rasen shuriken.
“Hey ero sannin is it time for a break yet…you’ve been working me day in and day out.” Naruto was on his knees gasping for air and favouring his right arm as it was in pain due to it being overworked.
“Well I do guess you have been working hard enough…so I’ll give you the rest of the day off.” Jiraiya finally gave in and gave Naruto his break for the day so he can rest up for tomorrows training again.
“Finally, now I can see how everyone else is doing” Naruto was just leaving the training grounds of where they were training right when Jiraiya stopped him for a moment.
“Hey Naruto wait for a second, you can go…but on one condition.” Jiraiya grinned at Naruto while Naruto was anxious to get out of there and relax for the first time in a long time.
“Aww c’mon ero sannin, you said I could go now please let me go” as Naruto awaited Jiraiya’s request all Jiraiya could do was grin.
“Okay here’s the deal Naruto, I need you to perform that jutsu you’ve been practising for me.” Jiraiya has a big smile on his face awaiting Naruto’s answer.
“You mean the one you said to never use on you? But doesn’t that disobey your very own orders?” Naruto looked very puzzled due to Jiraiya’s decision.
“Yes! I know that Naruto just do as I say and you can go and do as you please.” Jiraiya was starting to get frustrated and impatient so Naruto finally decided to perform his jutsu.
“Alright whatever you say ero sannin, just remember you asked me to do this…HAREM NO JUTSU!” Naruto performed the jutsu summoning countless women flaunting around Jiraiya for a few moments. When the Jutsu was done Jiraiya had passed out from shock and pleasure, and Naruto then left to the village.
“See you later ero sannin…call me if you need me!” finally that pervert’s weakness does me some good hehehe.
In a forest just outside the hidden village of the grass were Suigetsu, Karin, Juugo and Sasuke.
“Hey Sasuke where are we off to next?” Karin asked.
“Why are you so damn anxious to leave all of a sudden? We just got here a few minutes ago so why don’t you relax.” Suigetsu responded to Karin as Suigetsu just wanted to rest up after their encounter with Juugo.
“Both of you just relax, we will get moving in an hour or so and see where we have to go next after Karin tracks Kisame and Itachi’s chakra so we can pursue them.” Sasuke tried to keep order between the group for now interrupting their childish argument.
“Now more importantly I’m sure you three now that my brother Itachi and his partner Kisame are in an organisation called the Akatsuki. The Akatsuki is an organisation who has nine members as far as I know but there could be even more or even less, their goals are undetermined to anyone as of now but one thing is for that if my brother Uchiha Itachi is in this organisation they will more than likely start to target us if we begin to pose as a problem against them.” Sasuke gave a brief description of the Akatsuki organisation and how they may be a disturbance to their plans.
“Alright so what? All we got to do is wipe everyone of those buggers out one by one and then when your bother Itachi is all but left alone we take him out.” Suigetsu’s suggestion was shot down quickly by Sasuke.
“Suigetsu if you try anything like that we will be the one’s who will be wiped out. These guys are specially recruited because of their special techniques and are all S-rank criminals, so they’re kind of like us because I wanted you three because of your abilities but there are four of us and 9 of them and they are more than likely higher in skill than us.” Sasuke explained why Suigetsu’s suggestion was so flawed.
“Hey wait a minute, how the hell do you know so much about these hacks? weren’t you supervised 24/7 by that freak Orochimaru?” Suigetsu was surprised at Sasuke’s outside knowledge even with those three years of training with Orochimaru.
“It’s simple actually, Orochimaru used to be a fellow member of these “hacks” you call them and he told me all about them but never gave any deep details because he was probably afraid I would abandon him and search for power there.” Sasuke gave an entire explanation about the whole situation and cleared everything up.
“Suigetsu your so clueless, here Sasuke knows all about these Akatsuki guys and here you stand baffled like an idiot just standing there not doing anything like you usually are.” Karin scolded at Suigetsu immediately.
“Shut up Karin! He also wasn’t in a damn cage for three years…and since you seem to know so much about them why don’t you shed some more light on the topic?” Suigetsu knew fully well Karin knew nothing about Akatsuki so he tried to make her look dumb in front of everyone.
“Hey Sasuke should we get going now?” Karin quickly hanged the subject. “Alright I guess it is time to head out…wake up Juugo for me will you Suigetsu?” Sasuke said.
“Are you kidding wake him up yourself!” Suigetsu was still scared of Juugo losing control like he did earlier and demolished everything on his sight.
“Suigetsu you big baby I’ll do it for you then.” Karin made her way over and gently woke Juugo up. “hey what’s going on Sasuke? Juugo asked.
“We’re heading out get ready.” Sasuke rounded everyone up and they started to head out to the hidden village of the rock.
At the Akatsuki base they discuss where their plans are at and they discuss the situation about Hidan and Kakuzu.
“So is everyone here?” Deidara asked.
“Yes it seems as though we can finally start the meeting.” The leader replied.
“So as you all know I’ve told you that the pairing of Hidan and Kakuzu are dead.” the leader started to talk about the deaths of the two members.
“So what are we going to do about it? Kisame asked the leader.
“Well right now our main priority is for us to retrieve their rings and bring them back here so that if we have the chance to recruit a new member we have the rings to give them and we need them for the bijuu extraction.” The leader began to say his action plan to the group and what they will do.
“For this specific mission I’m going to send Zetsu to go and retrieve both of their rings and return here immediately.” the leader appointed Zetsu due to his camouflage skills.
“When Zetsu returns we will send the team of Deidara and Tobi to retrieve the ring of Orochimaru…and if he resists take him down with all your force because he is a tough opponent for anyone.” the leader’s plan had began to unfold.
“Alright this meeting has come to and end resume your posts.”
Back in Konoha Naruto entered the town and started to search for his friends. As Naruto was walking down the streets he passed the ramen shop and his stomach began to rumble.
“Aww man I’m soooo hungry but I have no money…that greedy ero sannin used my money to gamble and buy sake.” Naruto was frustrated and starving so all he could do has wait outside and stare at the steamy fresh ramen.
“Don’t have enough money again eh Naruto? One of these days your going to have to pay for me ha-ha.” When Naruto looked up it was Kakashi.
“Kakashi sensei! Thank goodness you’re here I don’t have any money an-” Kakashi cut Naruto off “ha-ha don’t worry about it it’s on me this time Naruto I’ll put it on, um your tab I guess.” Kakashi and Naruto laughed and shared a bowl of ramen together.
“It’s been a while though hasn’t it sensei? With all my training I’ve been extremely busy with ero sannin, he’s been pushing me and pushing me until I can’t breathe.” Just of the thought Naruto began to tire.
“Well I guess Jiraiya can be a bit harsh sometimes but try and keep your spirits up, and one day you might even become the Hokage if you keep training under him…after all he is a legendary sannin Naruto, you should be more respectful of him.” Kakashi lectured Naruto on how to respect his elders and how he should appreciate everything Jiraiya has done for him.
“I’ll try Kakashi sensei, well I should get going I really want to see how everyone else is doing…thanks sensei I’ll pay you back later!” as Naruto was shouting at Kakashi he ran off to see his friends. Kakashi thought to himself Naruto you never change do you. Naruto began to walk up the streets of Konoha and look to see if he could spot one of his friends. All of a sudden Naruto spotted Rock Lee and Tenten eating at one of the restaurants in Konoha and Lee was all dressed up and same with Tenten. Naruto rushed in to say hi.
“Hey guys I haven’t seen you two in a while how’s it going? And why are you two so dressed up…are you meeting Tsunade?” Naruto asked both Lee and Tenten what they were doing.
“Um Naruto we’re on a date, me and Tenten have been dating for two weeks now.” Rock lee answered as Naruto couldn’t help but look surprised.
“Naruto what’s the matter? Are you okay?” Tenten asked.
“Well I just never pictured the two of you together, I mean I barely see you to begin with Tenten and Lee is always training.” Naruto still was kind of surprised.
“Well we’re just having dinner here but would you like to join us Naruto?” Lee asked.
“No thanks I just had some ramen with Kakashi sensei.” Naruto rubbed his stomach and had another thought about ramen.
“That’s amazing! The bond between a student and a sensei, it’s truly moving!” Rock lee started to cry out of joy.
“I think I should head out, do you know where Sakura is by any chance?” Naruto asked.
“Last time I saw her she was in the Hokage’s office getting a mission, she was looking for you also.” Rock lee replied.
“Okay thank you Lee I’ll go find her now, see you later Tenten.” Naruto busted out of the restaurant and ran up to Tsunade’s office to see her and Sakura and to see why Sakura Wanted to see him.
“Sakura I have a special mission for you and for that Naruto but I guess we have to wait for him to come here if he realizes I’m looking for him.” Tsunade and Sakura sat and waited for Naruto and then all of a sudden he ran in.
“I’m here granny Tsunade!” Naruto yelled at the top of his lungs.
“Naruto you idiot how dare you refer to the Hokage like that, how disrespectful of you!.” Sakura punched Naruto in the faced and tried to shut him up.
“Thank you Sakura, and Naruto be quiet I have a mission for you both and it’s very important that you two complete this one.” Tsunade started to explain the mission to Sakura and Naruto.
“So what’s our mission Granny? It better not be a dumb C-rank mission again.” Naruto started to complain and then Sakura stopped him from saying anything stupid again.
“Alright you two enough, your mission will be given to you immediately but it will only be Naruto and you so it’s all more important that you to co-operate and work together.” Tsunade took a deep breath and said
“ Your mission is to-”
“Alright Zetsu move out and retrieve the rings and then we move to phase two of the mission.” The leader sent Zetsu out on his mission
“So we’re finally in the hidden village of the Rock are we? So what now Sasuke?”
Next Chapter Naruto and Sakura get their mission, Zetsu sets out to get the rings of Hidan and Kakuzu and Team snake arrives in the hidden village of the rock.
If a moderator reads this or an Admin, may you guys change the title of the fanfic to "A New Dawn Breaks" ? I mistakenly put "A New Generation" because that is the sequel to this fanfic that I am currently working on and it is stuck in my mind. So if you guys could change the title it would be greatly appreciated, thanks.
Last edited by Sky; 03-01-2009 at 02:59 PM..
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A New Dawn Breaks Chapter 2: Missions Received.
“Your mission I’m giving you involves Akatsuki, all I need you two to do is for you to investigate the same place where Hidan and Kakuzu were killed and see if you can find any information or any leads as to where Akatsuki is and also any information to do with report to me at once.” Tsunade briefed over the mission with Naruto and Sakura.
“So all we have to do is search that place for a few hours and we’re done? Hardly seems like a worthy mission for me.” Naruto sighed hoping it would have been a more exciting mission.
“Naruto you idiot! This mission could lead us to Akatsuki, what’s more important than that? If we find Akatsuki we find Itachi and then we can find Sasuke since he is going after him…don’t you get it?” Sakura was furious at his lack of respect for Tsunade.
“Alright Sakura I’ll do the mission…so Tsunade is it only going to be me and Sakura?” Naruto asked
“Yes it will only be you two because It’s only an investigation and you two shouldn’t be in danger what so ever because it’s been a while since Hidan and Kakuzu have been killed, so Akatsuki has probably gotten what they wanted from their bodies so now it’s time for us to move in and look for clues.” Tsunade said.
“So why didn’t we try doing this mission earlier, I mean we probably could have gotten more information than what we will probably get, so why go now?” Naruto asked.
“Naruto if we would have gone earlier it would have been dangerous because if Akatsuki knew about the deaths of those two they were more than likely to arrive shortly after so if we were to send a team down there to investigate it would only lead to further altercations with Akatsuki and possibly taking casualties, so this way we can do our job undetected and safely.” Tsunade replied.
“Tsunade we’ll do our best!” Sakura said.
“Okay good, now start preparing and move out!.” Tsunade said.
Sakura and Naruto both left the Hokage’s office to gather supplies for the trip to the place of where Hidan and Kakuzu had been defeated.
“Hey Sakura want to grab a bite to eat?” Naruto asked.
“Okay sure, I’ll meet you at the ramen shop.” Sakura replied
The two of them met at the ramen shop and ordered their food. At first it was very quiet and neither of them would speak a word to each other.
“Naruto…do you think we’ll ever get Sasuke back?” Sakura asked
“I don’t know for sure because right now all he wants is to avenge his clan and kill his brother Itachi, and even if we were face to face with him right now and pleaded to him and got down on our knees he would cut right through to get to Itachi.” Naruto had a sad look on his face filled with doubt.
“Things just aren’t the same with him is it? We were good friends until Orochimaru came into the picture, then he ruined everything and took him away from us.” all Sakura could do was look down in despair and doubt also as she was saddened by the thought of never seeing Sasuke again.
“I miss him to… he was the first friend I’ve ever had, and we pushed ourselves to the limits every single day and wanted to see who could out do the other in anything and everything.” Naruto replied.
“Naruto…I- I want Sasuke back.” Sakura had a tear drip down her cheek.
Naruto thought to himself Sasuke…we’re coming for you and I promise to bring you back.
Far away team snake had just arrived in the hidden village of the rock.
“Hey Sasuke what do we do now? I mean there’s nothing to do in this village.” Suigetsu asked.
“Suigetsu we’re here because we need to find any clues possible to where their base is.” Sasuke said
“How will we find anything here?” Suigetsu asked.
“Sasuke we probably won’t find much here but this is a village that not much is known about it so this could be a very good place to have their base.” Sasuke added.
“Alright why don’t we split up for a bit?” Sasuke suggested.
“ I think it would be logical for me to go with Juugo since I can restrain him, so then that leaves Karin and Suigetsu together.” Sasuke thought to himself hopefully they don’t kill each other.
“Sasuke! I can’t work with her, she’s totally incompetent, she probably cant even track people she probably goes of her own hunch.” Suigetsu said
“Shut up water boy! I’m clearly more capable than you because I wasn’t caged for three years under Orochimaru.” Karin snapped back at Suigetsu.
“Quit it you two…you guys need to stay calm for a few hours so we don’t attract a whole bunch of attention because we aren’t a part of this village, luckily the guards aren’t the sharpest around so we got in now let’s make sure we stay in.” Sasuke put Karin and Suigetsu in order.
Finally team snake set aside their differences for a bit and they started to check out the city.
Back at the Akatsuki base Zetsu was about ready to start his mission while Tobi and Deidara will wait anxiously to start theirs.
“Sir leader would you like me to dispose of any evidence and bodies if I see any?” Zetsu asked.
“Yes Zetsu please don’t leave anything behind for anyone to find…and please do keep a low profile because we don’t want to get noticed at the point in time.” the leader said.
“Don’t I always sir?” Zetsu said.
“Alright time to head out Zetsu.” The leader said.
Zetsu left the base and journeyed on to his mission. Once he left the leader still had to brief the whole Akatsuki on what they will do next.
“Alright is everyone here?” Leader asked.
Everyone had replied yes and everyone was accounted for except Zetsu.
“Okay I have just been notified by one of our sources from the hidden village of the rock that there are four nin from outside villages travelling in the village of the rock look for Akatsuki.” the leader said.
“Well why does it even matter? They’re in a village where non of us come from and they’re probably a bunch of punks who think they can handle us.” Kisame responded.
“The members in this group are Suigetsu Houzaki, Juugo, Karin and…Sasuke Uchiha.” The leader said
Itachi was listening and was very surprised to have that his brother is looking for Akatsuki.
“He’s after me.” Itachi said
“Yes it does seem that way doesn’t it Itachi.” Sir leader responded.
“Me and Kisame will keep a watch out for them and be alert, we will also give you updates on their status when we are travelling.” said Itachi.
“Wait hold on a minute.” Deidara interrupted.
“What is it Deidara? Is something the matter?” The leader asked
“Well wasn’t your kid brother training under Orochimaru?” Deidara Asked
“Yes he was.” Itachi answered
“Well I highly doubt someone like Orochimaru would let Sasuke form his own little team and start wandering aimlessly around different villages trying to locate Akatsuki.” Deidara stated.
“That means Orochimaru must be dead.” Itachi replied.
“Well if this is all true we have to assume that Orochimaru’s ring is still at his hide out so this is our chance to retrieve it.” Sir leader said.
“Deidara, Tobi! We’re having a change of plans. It’s time to go get Orochimaru’s ring back and restore all the rings again.” Sir leader said.
“We’re heading out now sir leader, Tobi c’mon we’re leaving” Deidara said
“Alright Deidara I’m going I’m going I don’t really se the rush since Orochimaru is dead…all he’s going to do is lay there and let us have the ring.” Tobi said
“Tobi be quiet and follow your orders!.” Deidara shouted at Tobi
Zetsu, Tobi, and Deidara set off to retrieve the rings and complete their missions.
“Sasuke that guy is staring at me weirdly, and he wont stop looking at you either.” Juugo said.
“What do you mean Juugo? Know one’s there.” Sasuke responded.
“That man in the shop keeps looking up at us” Juugo said.
“Okay Juugo I need you to listen to me, we’re going to keep walking at have that guy follow us and see what he does…if he provokes us I need you to attack him.” Sasuke said to Juugo.
“Alright lets go Sasuke.” Juugo said.
The man followed Sasuke and Juugo all the way to the edge of town and kept a close eye on Sasuke and Juugo. They finally stopped and turned around and asked the man what he was doing.
“Hey do you have business with either of us sir?” Sasuke asked the man.
“It depends…Are you Uchiha Sasuke?” The man asked
“Yes I am and what’s it to you?” Sasuke answered
“Nothing I’m just here to kill you.”
“ Alright Sakura I think this is it let’s get going and look around here.” Naruto said.
“Almost there…hopefully I can get there before anyone else does so I can dispose of the bodies and evidence.” Zetsu said.
Deidara and Tobi arrived at Orochimaru’s hide out.
“Well here we are Tobi.” Deidara said
“It’s about time sempai, it you’re so slow I’m surprised you could even keep up.” Tobi said
Next chapter Tobi and Deidara enter Orochimaru’s lair, Zetsu, has an unexpected surprise, and Sasuke and Juugo let loose on the mystery man.
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