Zodiac

[Nightmare]

Chapter one

“Thank goodness the snow stopped before school got out,” Danny commented to his friends.
“Yeah especially for you Danny,” Kevin said teasingly a grin spreading across his face. “You are the only person I know that’s crazy enough to think of walking home in this kind of weather.”
“What so I like the cold,” Danny shrugged. “Well, I’ll see you guys tomorrow.”
“Wait I’ll come with…you” Kevin said turning only to see that Danny was already half way down the block. “How does he do that?” Kevin whispered to him self to the others he said. “Well guess I should hurry.”
Danny was walking home quickly (he always did). Despite what any one he said was not in any hurry to get home; he just didn’t have any where to be so why not go home. As he walked Danny looked around. He wasn’t looking for any thing in particular just glancing around, as he did so something caught his eye. Danny bent down to examine the object more closely and found that it was a small yellow stone; he reached down and grabbed it and was forced to his knees. Danny couldn’t remember ever being in this much pain it felt like his bones were on fire. Danny screamed out in pain just before collapsing.
Kevin heard Danny’s scream and broke into a sprint. “Danny!” Kevin shouted when he saw his friend lying face down in the snow. As he reached his friend and bent over him. “Come-on man talk to me!” he said shaking Danny.
“ooooooh” Danny replied string. “Did you get the number of that steamroller?”
“What happened to you man?” Kevin asked helping Danny to stand.
“Don’t know” Danny said truthfully “but it feels like my skin just tried to crush my bones.”
“Well are you all right?” Kevin inquired.
“Yes I think so” Danny replied “hay look at what I found in the snow it’s–” Danny began but broke off when he opened his hand and saw that the stone had disappeared.
“It’s what?” Kevin asked looking worried.
“Um nothing,” Danny told him a little less truthfully than before. “Why are you here any way?”
“Well you would know that if you had waited five seconds for me to say I was coming too.” Kevin snapped puting his hands on his hips. “Back to more important things; are you alright?”
“Yes, yes for the last time yes!” Danny exclaimed throwing his arms in the air.
“Well good but how do you think you fell?” Kevin asked.
“Well Kev” Danny replied folding his arms over his chest, voice dripping with sarcasm. “There’s this thing called gravity–”
“I know what gravity is!” Kevin interrupted leaning forward. “What I want to know is how you fell.”
“Well if you want to know the event that caused me to fall then… as near as I can tell I must have slipped on some ice.” Danny said this time serious he knew that this was definitely not what happened; he may have imagined the stone but the pain he had felt was real. Kev was his best friend, but Danny doubted the wisdom of telling him the he was experiencing fainting spells and wracking pain. “I’ll tell some one if it happens again” Danny thought to himself.
“Well what do you expect?” Kev teased “walking home after a snow storm in main.”
“Whatever” Danny said in response “Let’s get home O.K.?”

[Nightmare]

O.k. I'm going to try to get chapter two up as soon as Possible but, my family just went on vacation so I won't be able to for a while.

i like it. it's funny ... "there's this thing called gravity..." HAHAHA

when will you be able to post the next chapter? i want to know what happened with that rock!!!

[Nightmare]

I'll post it as soon as possible, but I'm in Minnesota for the next week or so so I wont be able to for a while. But I'm writing down on paper so I can type it out right away when I get back.

[cutieB]

hahahaha that's hilarious. I love it please write more.

[Nightmare]

well I'm almost done with chapter three. but.. no one is reading it hardly...

[Abarai]

c'mon pall it's good..it's funny :)

[acelomado]

Well.. good writer...

[Nightmare]

O.k update time I've got, seven chapters written, but I still need to do editing speaking of which I've done an overhaul on the chapters I've got done, so expect to see a change here pretty soon.

[Fox Girl]

I think it's very good...I like it a lot. Keep up the good work. ^^