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Old 09-07-2008   #1
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Default Chained and Broken {{A poem i did during a hard time}}

Chained and broken
So many words left unspoken
Fears mixed with lies
As tears form in my eyes
Shadows of a doubt
While time slowly runs out
Unsure of what to do
Can't say what I'd like to say
The words won't come out
No matter how I try
No one can see me
So I sit here and try not to cry
Broken at the heart
Chained at the soul
This is what's left:
Chained and broken
Words still unspoken
Waiting to die
But too strong to cry

{{Please tell me what you think of the poem! Thanks for reading.}}
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Old 09-17-2008   #2
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enjoyed it ^.^
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Old 09-17-2008   #3
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wow deep...its nice...but it's sad though...great job!!! ^_^
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very nice! it's got a deep undercurrent that really grabs onto the reader.
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Oh, lovely. I'm usually not a fan of poems that rhyme, but I particularly enjoyed this. Nice job~
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Klay Vampy View Post
Chained and broken
So many words left unspoken
Fears mixed with lies
As tears form in my eyes
Shadows of a doubt
While time slowly runs out
Unsure of what to do
Can't say what I'd like to say
The words won't come out
No matter how I try
No one can see me
So I sit here and try not to cry
Broken at the heart
Chained at the soul
This is what's left:
Chained and broken
Words still unspoken
Waiting to die
But too strong to cry

{{Please tell me what you think of the poem! Thanks for reading.}}
very nice, pretty similar to me few weeks ago
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Old 09-22-2008   #7
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[FONT="Comic Sans MS"] nice (^_^)
I really enjoyed reading it though its kinda sad...
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wow that is really good *claps * I really lke it.
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that was awesome :..(
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OMG! Thanks guys! I will definitely be putting more up here. Just to let you know, not all are sad poems. Some of them are kinda happy and some are just things that make you think. Again, thanks for the comments. I'm glad you guys all enjoyed my poem.
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