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Old 08-23-2008   #1
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I wrote this poem for/in loving memory of our dearest Ryuu. I miss him terribly. Definitely not my greatest piece of work, but oh well. It's the thought that counts. <3
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Where did you go?
Why did you leave?
Can't you stay?
Take away my sadness?
Ease the pain that burns inside,deep
Deeper,deeper it hurts
If only you could feel my pain you'd understand
We are separated
Its not your fault,you don't understand
But the one whom holds the barrier knows
Come back to me and stay
So you can ease the pain
So you can chase my fears away
Save me from the darkness and cold
Hold me in a warm embrace
Take away my fears
And dry my tears

And Come Back To Me.....
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hey thats pretty good ariya
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wow !!

thats amazing !

you're really good at writing poems ariya! i suck at writing...:(
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yea i cant write poems or any creative writing for that matter... but your poems still really good
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Thank you everyone. I'm delighted that you all enjoyed the poem so much.
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what do you mean for our beloved ryuu..

however i enjoyed the poem.. especailly how you expressed that it wasn't his fault and how he doesn't understand.. i liked it! very cool.
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what do you mean for our beloved ryuu..
I wrote it for him since he left...and in memory of him since he's gone...It's that simple.

Thank you, though. Glad you liked it.

I'm glad you liked it too, Russkie.
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I wrote it for him since he left...and in memory of him since he's gone...It's that simple.

Thank you, though. Glad you liked it.

I'm glad you liked it too, Russkie.
I see.. well no wonder he hasn't responded.. i understood it the first time, though he did warn me as well, he just never mentioned when! thank you Ariya..
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omg!!! i love this poem.u write really good poems.
u speak the truth i like that =]
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