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Default What you did.

this is my first free verse poem ever. I just wrote it last night. So I thought I should see what people think.



I read it but didn't believe it
You said you did it for me
Because you loved me
You said we needed better
all we needed was to be together


I was there for you
I missed her too
we all did
Now we miss you


I close my eyes and I can still see
you didn't do it for me
You didn't care or think about who would it would be
You did it for you
you didn't do it for me


She didn't hate you
but I do
You wanted to see her so bad
you sinned
you won't see her again

you couldn't handle the pain
so you passed it onto me
unlike you I'll take the pain and live
I'll Never do what you did






Thanks for reading it.
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