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Old 06-02-2009   #1
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I should warn you all, this is a small fanfiction about Lily Evans and Remus Lupin from Harry Potter. This story take place during their 7th year and it's not finished yet. I would like to hear what people think about it. And yeah it's just the first part of it. It's not finished yet. Ok? :b

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It was a Friday afternoon and the last class for the week had just ended. Lily was going down into the dungeons, she watched the students she passed as if she was patrolling. Which she hoped they all would think. The reason that she did this yet another day was that she was going to meet him, and they didn't want anybody else to find out. Because this was their small secret and it was planned to stay like that.
She opened the door to the dungeon number 12 and walked right in and waited for him to show up. It just took about 5 minutes before the door opened again and Remus went in.
“I've missed you” He said with a smile while he was watching this beautiful girl which he knew was his even as nobody else did. It was hard for him to hear James talking about how much he liked her and wanted to ask her out. It was even harder to not show how he felt about her around everyone else. He wanted to scream out how he felt but he couldn't that.
“I've missed you too” she said while she dragged him near him so if somebody would pass then they couldn't see them. She watched him with her beautiful green eyes and he couldn't help enjoying the moment..
He put her nearer him and felt her wonderful scent against him, he really loved it. Then he moved his lips nearer hers and they started to kiss. It was just too perfect almost. It was such a moment which could last forever if they just had the time. Sadly they didn't and his friends would miss him after a while. He had told Prongs, Padfoot and Wormtail that he had to study for a while. It was the perfect alibi. They sat down at the floor close to each other and just get cozy by holding hands, kissing some more and just stare at each other. This lasted for about 20 minutes before they realized that they maybe should do something else but this.
“ I hope the rest of the gang doesn't realize where you been going for the last weeks” she said to Remus smiling.
“They're at James Quidditch practice and still thinks I'm somewhere studying. It's okay, we're still safe here. I promise” he said smiling back to her, then suddenly kissed her. She wasn't slow to return it.
After about 15 minutes they realised that they had to do what people expected of prefects or at least go away from the dungeons. “ I don't want to leave you, knowing that I won't be able to hold you for a while and hear everything James says about you. It's unbearable...” He looked at her and watched her gave him a look of understanding.
“It's hard for me too, every time he's trying to ask me out I see you behind him and all I want is to run to you for shelter but it's impossible. We have to do the best of the situation.” She said slightly sad, he could almost see the tears in her eyes.
“If we wait just a little bit more then we could show the others what we have, but not now” Remus said to her and she nodded back still slightly sad. But she did know what he meant, it wasn't such great idea to start a big fight about this while it came to his friends. Who knew what James should say or do if he found out? He had loved her since they all got here and for a lot of years he had tried to ask her out. She always told him no, but now she got a reason to really say no even as he didn't know why. She could agree that she got feelings for him, but she got feelings for Remus too. That's why they started this relationship.
They both got up from the floor wiping off the dust from their cloaks, just watched each other and then gave each other a big hug. Or it was more holding each other like they would never meet again. It was like they couldn't stop kissing each other and after at least 10 kisses they stopped and watched the other person in front of them, smiling a little bit then stopped.
“ I know I must go away but my feet don't want to move, my heart crying out this is wrong and I just want to stay with you forever. But I know I can't” said Remus while he moved nearer the door out. “I really don't want too go, not without you at least” he said sadly.
“ I know what you mean but we don't have any other choice right now” Lily said more sad then Remus. “I know I just want you near me when I see you in the common room even if that's impossible. But I also know we must get going..” She said and Remus nodded back to her.
He went out of the door, slightly closed it after him and when he walked upwards to the great hall she started to go out of the dungeon too and slowly upwards the great hall and then to the common room. She needed to get to the girls dorm.
The two following weeks went on like the previously and they kept to meet each other in the dungeons or in the back of the library behind some big bookshelf's. But this Friday they did meet each other in the dungeon but something about this day was different from the others. If Remus only know how much different when he went down towards the dungeon number 12, then he would probably not go there. But of course he didn't know it. He opened the door and walked in towards Lily who already was there waiting for him. He gave her a big smile, closed the door after him and went closer to her. When he stood right in front of her, he gave her a big hug. Just happy too be near her again. It was horrible to watch her in class but not be able to hold her or just put his hands through her hair. Oh he just loved lily's hair; the way it fell over her face and so on..
Lily was resting her head against Remus breast, holding him and couldn’t help it but tears were falling from her eyes and down her face. This was just to hard for her..
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Old 06-03-2009   #2
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That was a long interesting story
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Thanks but that's not the end, it's going to be the middle of the story i think.
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...urrrrrrrrgh!,.

i stopped on i think first part,.

i'm sorry but it bored me,.

i could've liked it if it lily and james,.

or remus and tonks!,.

whew!,.

imma harry potter fan you know!,.hehehe!,.♥
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...urrrrrrrrgh!,.

i stopped on i think first part,.

i'm sorry but it bored me,.

i could've liked it if it lily and james,.

or remus and tonks!,.

whew!,.

imma harry potter fan you know!,.hehehe!,.♥
Ok I understand, I think i'm one of a few people who like the though of Lily and Remus together.

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not really into Harry Potter, but the story is good enough to stand-alone.
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i'm srry but i've never heard of lily and remus. lily maybe, but it's a long shot. though i love the harry potter movies. maybe i forgot about them. wat do they look like? btw, the story was interesting. :) i look forward to more.
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i'm srry but i've never heard of lily and remus. lily maybe, but it's a long shot. though i love the harry potter movies. maybe i forgot about them. wat do they look like? btw, the story was interesting. :) i look forward to more.

...remus is remulus lupin!,.

remember in the prisoner of azkaban?.,.

he was the defense against the dark arts teacher!,.

the friend of sirius (who is the prisoner of azkaban)

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it was ok, but it does not give the same feeling that you get from the books, and the books almost never seem like a romantic novel.
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it was ok, but it does not give the same feeling that you get from the books, and the books almost never seem like a romantic novel.
I know, but I wrote it because of a roleplay between me and some friends on msn. :) That's why it's not like the books =)
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