Fox Girl Story Part 3

[Fox Girl]

Then the lady said, “My name is Queen of Creatures, but please call me, Light. I will help you. You see my dear, what happened to you is the cause of an evil spell. An evil witch put this spell on you but you must understand that I am here to help you. Come with me and I will show you were I live, for the forest is not a good place for you and soon will be dark.”
Light, the nice queen, took Maelyn on her cloud and flew them up into the sky. There was a beautiful castle in a different place that Maelyn never saw before. The Queen smiled. Once they came to the golden door, it slowly opened and let them inside. Once inside the castle, they came to a nice warm room, almost like a living room. They sat down and the Queen of Creatures called everyone to meet their new guest. The others soon came into the living room to join the two. Velvet, who wore all black and had red and black eyes, sat down. There were other creatures too, like a centaur. All were very nice. Once the others went back to their rooms, the only people left were Maelyn, Velvet and the queen.
Light said, “Velvet, I want you to watch over Maelyn. She is new and does not know what is going on. I will tell her more later. You will show her where her room is. I will be going to bed now.”
Light went off to her room as Velvet took Maelyn. Velvet didn’t say a word, but showed her to her room before she went to her bedroom. Maelyn thought it was odd that she didn’t say anything but she was too tired to think more of it. All she could think of is that it was just a dream. She had a hard time sleeping, but for some reason, the bed was nice and warm. She started to rest better even though she didn’t know what was going on.
For Queen Moonlight, she went to her son’s room and saw that he was gone. She told her husband. The King told the guards to find him. Maelyn’s parents came to the castle again and asked if the guard found their daughter. The Queen saw Maelyn’s mother crying and said, “We will try to find her and my son. Prince Sky is gone and I hope that everything is ok.”
Everyone in the town was worried. Everyone locked their doors and windows. The reason why so many people were worried was that Darken Sky might use them for his evil doing. Some of the people heard that strange things were going on. The parents of Maelyn thought that Maelyn was still a human but I am afraid to say that she was not. You see, once the liquor touched your lips, you could never change back. Only with the power within would you truly change back. That made the people of Moon Kingdom worried, for it had been years since there was a problem like this. Queen Moonlight was very upset of what was going on. She sat on her bed and tears fell from her face. King Risingsun came into the room. He sat down next to his crying wife and hugged her, holding her close.

[-.Shiki.-]

Haa, you're very inspiring.. I'm off for some drawing =D
If you want I'll show you what I did when I'm finished ;) [Not that I'm good at drawing anyways xDD]
And of course, waiting for next part >=D

[Fox Girl]

Ok..I love to see your drawings. I have drawings too but the not very good and I can't put them on my albums since they are having some sorta problem. XD

[Nightmare]

I quite enjoy your writing. It's very distracting, and I don't say that about just any story.