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Old 11-08-2008   #1
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Unhappy It has no title. but I think it tells my story ... somehow

Fumbling, twisted, tortured mind
crying violence of the protectors; trauma
bound by sadness, hidden by young smiles
feast of emotions; choosing to be blind

Now, a higher power hears the weeping never heard in this life song
Giving strength along with punishment; it's understood
Indecisively roaming obstacles of loving categories
To make a difference; I waited long

Difference made but the decision to speak didn't go far
Advice rebounded now the worries have turned against the worriER
Their smiles can last for as long as Eternity
But the realness of them only for as short as the twinkling of a star
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Very nice. Not got a brilliant flow but it works, keep writing -thumbs up-
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Nice work. I felt that I related to this piece somehow...
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Twas interesting. As Waste commented, the flow was... Meh. Wasn't bad, though. I enjoyed reading it.
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nice poem...^_^
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That was interesting ^.^
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Nice work. I felt that I related to this piece somehow...
Thanks.
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That wasn't bad. the flow wasn't really there and there isn't a rhyme scheme that I can find. I understand the feelings behind it though.
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Good poem! ^^
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