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Old 10-11-2009   #1
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yeah I am posting the story here I would kind of like to make it an anime. so if you want to help pm and make any editing notes below the story. oh and it is currently incomplte so come back to check out any updates
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table of contents
chapter1 barchetta's introduction
chapter2 tomoshibi introduction
chapter 3 sea to shadow
chapter 4 tomoshibi's grief
chapter 5 shadows plan
chapter 6 ijsje's introduction
chapter 7 shadows inner battle
chapter 8 shadows trip part 1
chapter 9 ijsje's betrayal
chapter 10 dark's past
chapter 11 shadow's past
chapter 12 alice's vist
chapter 13 shadows trip part 2
chapter 14 tomoshibi's battle against the darkness
chapter 15 shadow and dark
chapter 16 tomshibi wounded
chapter 17 shadow learns earth
chapter 18 shadow hears the story.
chapter 19 shadow's morning, the first orb gate opens
chapter 20 The fire orb forged
chapter 21 Ice still alive?!
chapter 22 shadow and light fight

barchetta's introduction hello I am barchetta but I am often called sea by my friends, the reason for both names is that I was found on a row boat which is what the word barchetta means. so now I am going to tell you my story, my path. it all started when my friend tomoshibi and I were at the movies we just watched a good movie and then we noticed one of my favorite movies was going to show soon, Dracula the original in black and white, but we were out of money so we decide to go get some money from the bank next door. we went and stood in line for awhile when to guys in trench coats and sunglasses came in. they held up a gun and

said "don't move"

so nobody moved and they tried to steal money when sirens started. the phone began to ring, one guy picked it up and

said " hello? oh so this is the police chief, yep we got hostages so don't come in or we will kill them all and to prove we are serious we will shoot one right now."

one grabbed me and took me to the roof. he put his gun to my head and with a smile on his face he pulled the trigger. I found my self falling into blackness falling, when I suddenly stopped. I watched a old man in all black walk out of the darkness, he had skin as white as paper, it seemed to glow in the darkness.

he said " hello barchetta, it is time for you to play your role. it is time for you to help tomoshibi, get stronger, strong enough to destroy the approaching darkness, I gave you powers when you both were born but it was locked up, I give you the key to your powers."

he threw to me a black crest with a star and black gems. then he walked away into the darkness.

the beginning tomoshibi introduction
I am tomoshibi my name means light and I am here to tell you about my story, my role, my path. just as sea said it began in a theater we went to the bank and he was taken up the stairs, and that is where my part begins. he was being taken up stairs and I was sneaking around the other guy, I intended to take him out, when I got behind him I grabbed his gun and kicked him in the shins knocking him down, and then I hit redial the police and told them to come in now that the one guy was incapacitated, so I went to open the door for them when they came running in and I got hit by the door and was knocked out cold. I found myself falling, in the darkness, when suddenly I stopped. I saw a guy walk out with clothes as dark as night, and skin as light as the moon.

he said " it is time to play your role, as the hero that will save the world from the darkness. at birth I gave you the powers of light. Now I give you the key."

he passed a white crest with a star and white jewels. Then he walked away back into the darkness.

sea to shadow
I was in the darkness floating around, looking when I found a gate, I open the door and found my self in a cavern their was a bed, a few books most were my favorites, a TV, VCR and videos also my favorite. then there was in the center of the room, a table with a glass orb and a cut from the table in the shape of my crest. I placed my crest into the hole and images began to appear, first was a yellow tape saying police investigation, or something like that. then it moved over to my body on the ground. at that time I was kind of freaked out but I half expected that at the same time. then it blurred and showed showed the image of a black knight, that

said "hello I am here to help you out by explaining how to use your crest to you, you can concentrate to make shadows take shape, and that is all I am going to tell you about that for now, as for your job you have two responsibilities now that you are dead, first is to make your friend stronger you do that how ever you can, you know him better then I do, second is to destroy anything that comes out of that gate until he is strong enough to eradicate the beast. those are your duties"

then I said " alright I accept those jobs"

then I grabbed my crest and played with it for awhile, then I sat down and thought up a plan on my chair that I made, and I finally I came up with a great plan.

tomoshibi's grief
I opened my eyes and found a nurse about to give me a shot,

"ugh where am I?" I asked.

"you are in the hospital" came her replied.

"I figured that much out, so why am I here?",

"you are here because the door smacked you in the head, and you got knocked out.",she said.

"so what is that shot you were about to give me?",

"it is a pain killer, I thought you would want it since you would wake up soon."

"right yeah I would like that , it feels like I got hit by a semi." I said.

her expression changed to real pale. "you felt that?" she asked.

"felt what?" I said anxiously.

"well on your way here in the ambulance, that I was driving we got his by a semi truck, because I was in a hurry and did not see him coming and our emergency lights were not working. you were lucky, so please don't hold it against me." she said.

"um, no broken bones right?", I said.

"no broken bones."

"and I am alive.... so I wont hold it against you, just next time drive more carefully." I said.

"yes sir I wont ever get hit by a semi while I am driving an ambulance again." she said

"good, good I am glad that you won't do that ever again, so please give me the shot and, then I will go back to sleep if that is ok with you."

"yes sir."

I woke up again, during vi sting hours. my parents came.

"hello son we have some good news, and some bad. first thing is you are alive, second thing is we brought you a cake, third thing is sea, is dead."

at that I was at full attention at first I thought oh my best friend is dead, then I thought maybe I should lighten the mood. so when I sprung up

I said " what, you brought me cake!?"

right away I could tell the joke was not working. after that I sulked for awhile. at night I picked up, the crest from my bedside table, and

said,"this is the price of power then I don't want it at all."

I then through it at the wall and cried for awhile. when I heard a scratching on my window.

shadows plan
I practiced for a while until tomoshibi was well enough to fight. then what I did was at night I sneaked into there house and went up stairs careful not to make the stairs creak. slowly, very slowly. then I went down the hall and stopped at tomoshibi's parents room. I then sent my shadows creeping under the door and into their brains. there I had my shadows hit all the right spots to keep them asleep for a while. then I opened the door walked to the bed and slung them one at a time over my shoulders. I then carefully went down the stairs and out the front door. I brought them to my base, there I grabbed the camera and took a picture then I picked up the letter that read, dear tomoshibi, I have kidnapped your parents, meet me at the hotel in the center of town, on the roof at midnight, or your parents will die. p.s. bring the crest you got from the bank incident. your enemy shadow I sent a pigeon formed of shadows to deliver the message. then I headed out to the meeting place with his parents. once there I made a cage of shadow and put them in, and waited, after a while he was there, right on time.

I said, "good evening."

then he asked, "why do you want me here?!"

"you want the crest don't you I can tell you do!!" he said,

"not in the least I just want to fight you, oh and from now on not have to kidnap to get you to come, so if I summon you know that someone will die if you do not come." I said.

then I released his parents and teleported them home.

"so let the fight begin!" I said

after that I created a spear of shadow and chucked it at him. he dodged to one side.

I then said, "you can turn light into a solid if you concentrate with the crest."

he did just that and formed a saber out of the light. I too formed a sword out of shadow. oh and you must know that during this whole time I am in armor made out of shadow so he will not recognize me. I ran up and struck with my sword of shadow, he blocked with his sword. I then threw another spear of shadow he caught it, then turned the spot light on it and generated a spear of light. I ran back up and hacked he blocked, then I fell back and he charged foreword, he jumped up stabbed with sword followed by spear. I caught the sword end and blocked his spear with my sword. he then fell back and charged foreword again, I blocked his sword and he pushed forward for a few seconds in which I saw a black dog behind him. I smacked him aside, knowing what the dog was, charged forward and hacked it. it was a demon from beyond the gate. I created a shadow detector, and saw there was two more, one in the office building beside the one we are on and one down in the sewers. thus I looked over to where tomoshibi just got up and I started circling like a boxer. he followed suit and we started circling along the edge, when he got to the right side I formed a shadow ball and threw it at him, he got knocked over the side I then jumped off too, and created a rope of shadows, I than at the end of the rope willed a safety net, he landed on the net then I did, my force bounced him off into the window of the office building I then jumped in, third room on the right I backed into tomobishi went after me I killed the shadow, then he turned on the lights. as the lights went on I was like this is trouble and I formed a ball of shadow and threw it up at one of the light fixtures before it could turn on. then tomoshibi started charging up his attack, he launched it, a giant laser beam, and it hit. right in the chest, but it was not flesh and blood that replied no it was a black mist coming out of my so called body. then I look up at him and he is frozen stiff, I was wondering why when I looked at my self closer, my armor was gone. I quickly jumped out the window and made a rope of shadow to connect to the building. then I ran along the side of the building until I saw the man hole, I jumped towards it. created a ball of shadow and chucked it down at the man hole breaking it open. I then summoned two more ropes connecting to the hole, I used them to guide my decent, then I made a air bag out of shadow, and braced for impact. I then checked the shadow detector and found the demon dog, and killed it. I then continued in the direction of the my home base, that was one hell of a night.

ijsje's introduction
hi I am ijsje, but I currently I go by ice, I was ijsje before I died. then a mysterious person appeared, and

said "I have given you the power of ice, now go and find your dark master, that you are to serve."

soon after that I met a demon called dark,and I served under him. till one day I was instructed to steal the dark crest from the gate keeper. so I went to the gate and opened it up. there was a person in the building snoozing. he was having a dream, as you guessed this is shadow. he told me about his dream later in life so here, is his dream, he first saw a boat burning all around him with figures about twice his size, and their was a dagger in his hand. swoop one person down, a male, swoop, another now a female, at this point he starts laughing, hacking down every body that comes near him he approaches a life boat and jumps on, then he cuts the rope and the boat drops into the water where he paddles away. during this dream he was muttering something once I saw his mouth mutter, second time, and finally I hear what he is saying kill, kill kill. this scares me a bit but, I still goes closer. I reached down for the crest then his eyes flicked open, those eyes were not human, I froze in fear thinking he is a demon he is a demon, he is a demon, in the morning I realize I am in the feudal position muttering he is a demon he is a demon.

then I snapped out of it when I heard the question, "who are you?"

it took me a second to think about it, I said "I am ice" barely audible.

"what are you here for?" he asked

I look up and see he is a completely diff rent person then last night. he is normal, so I think it over very quickly, then I came up with a plan, and

said " I am here to serve you my master."

I was actually planing to make him think that then steal the crest.

he said "OK, you can serve me, if you prove yourself powerful."

"how" I asked,

he replied with " battle my enemy tomoshibi"

"ok I will battle him I use ice to battle." I said.

"alright then I will send him to a walk in freezer how about here" he said

as he summoned up a map and pointed.

I said " there will be just fine."

he then writes up a note and attaches it to a crow he made. I then went there with him, he put all the guards to sleep as we walked. we both sat in the freezer and waited, he came very soon after.

"OK ice this is your battle I will sit here." said shadow.

then the battle began I sent a wave of ice at him, he blocked with light, again, and again. then I aimed for the light bulbs that provided light, striking them all out. I then sent a wave of ice at him he became a solid thing of ice, I thought it was over until, I saw electricity run down from the light fixture, into him melting him free. I strike with another wave of ice he sends forth a wave of lightning towards me. shadow chuckled then disappeared. right before the lighting hit, I changed to ice and drifted out of there back to base.

shadow said " well you are strong enough to serve me for a while."

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story contiued

shadows inner battle

I was talking to the orb in my room, I asked him how I could get stronger, I needed to become stronger.

"There is a way in the underworld their is a sword, a sword of fire and darkness. only a truely masterful warrior of darkness can pick it up. you should be able to grab it." is what he said.

I then said " I will do that after one more challenge."

thus I created a bird wrote a letter and sent it. I was meeting him at night, at the darkest part of night, just before sun rise, on a building top. I went there and waited for a while, then he came. I generated my sword ready for battle and charged. he pulled out a flash light and pointed it to the sky. he used the flashlight, to generate electric, and he summoned down thunder. I was obliterated. then I heard a voice, the voice in my dreams.

" mhahahaha, you thought you could kill me with that, a little lighting."

then he appeared, in armor of shadow, without a helmet, his face was frighting, just as I thought, it looked human enough, except the eyes. the eyes were frighting I am use to it, but tomoshibi he is frozen stiff. oh and at the moment I am a cloud of shadow. he created some blades of shadow, or should I say I created them because he is me. the shadows fell towards tomoshibi. I was thinking oh no it will hit and I can't do any thing about it, but then a girl came running up, a little girl between five and ten, and then the blades bounced, off some invisible surface. I would have taken a sigh of relief but I did not have lungs. I formed myself, he formed several of himself and charged with swords, striking. I realized that the girl had her eyes closed. the swords deflected. I came out and wrapped him up in shadow the sun was rising.

he said " no don't hold me here, you know what will happen if we are caught in that light."

I walked to a vent and changed part of my body into shadow and slowly slid into the vent. the sun continued to rise

" no no, I will be good I promise anything but that no don't no no, ahhhhhhh"

it was day. I waited in the vent till sun set. I thought that would be the last time I saw him, boy was I wrong.

shadows trip part 1
I was getting ready to go, I went to the gate, and said " ice wait here and kill any thing that comes through the gate alright?"

"okay" she replied.

I open the gate and walked to the other side. I went down forming a stair case of darkness as I went along. I was thinking about my next stop at the city on the edge of the dark kingdom. it took awhile but eventually I got there.

once there I thought "now I have to convince the lord of the city to grant me access to the tunnel, like that will happen so smoothly."

I walked inside the city there were demons all around, in all shapes and sizes. I walked to the pub to get information. when I went through the doors of the pub, every one in the room gave me and odd look. which was expected, I mean a human does not belong in this world. I sat at one of the empty bar stools, next to this big mean looking guy, of course almost everyone in this bar was big and mean looking.

I asked " how do I go about getting access to the tunnels?"

the guy next to me said " the tunnels ha, you don't belong there, nor do you belong here"

the crowd cheered" yeah that's right."

" lets get the human and eat him"

" yum it's been some time since I have eaten a fresh human."

they all stood up, the guy to my left went to grab me, I summoned my sword and slashed him, two other guys tried to jump me I swung my sword and struck them both down, they charged and attacked one after another in groups of 1,2 3, and even 4. I struck them all down. the only one that didn't attack was the bar tender. after they all died or ran away the bar tender said " you must be tired you proved yourself more then worthy go up to room number 3 and sleep in the morning I will show you how to get access." that is what I did, but I kept one eye open

ijsje's betrayal

I ice was waiting, waiting for dark to come through the gate. yeah that is right I betrayed shadow, not that I was ever on his side. when he came through I was on one knee and saying

" welcome dark master to the mortal world, so what should we do first now that we are both here" I asked.

" lets start by taking down the warrior of light" he said, in such a great voice filled with self confidence and command.

yeah I loved him them and a part of me still loves him now.

"so orb I command you to show me the warrior of light"

the orb's spirit seemed to shake in fear, I could not see the spirit of the orb and thus I can only guess.

"hmm so he is at school at the moment." he said, god I can't get over his voice it has been so long since I heard it was what I was thinking at the time.

" let's attack him right now" he said.

" yes master let's attack him" I said,

and thus we headed over there and once there, me and him started smashing the place. I used my ice and froze the water pipes,some of the wood planks and also some of the grass. all of it was frozen, he on the other hand started chopping the place up, at a high speed, flash chop, flash chop, flash chop, going near the speed of light, if not surpassing it. he then stood back from the hole and sure enough the warrior of light came launching up out of the hole. I am always amazed by the accurateness of his dark eye, that shows all darkness to him, including the darkness in peoples hearts, reading there every dark thought like a book. I knew the battle would soon begin.

dark's past
I was once a samurai I was satisfied with a beautiful wife, and an honorable emperor, till one day I was on guard duty, then I saw a koma drop on a chain, the curved blade got yanked into my left eye. then more chain dropped down and wrapped around my neck, I was quickly running out of air. my eye fell closed and I saw darkness. I opened my eye, I still saw darkness, but I also saw a dark figure walking foreword, with pale white skin.

he said " I would like you to hold onto the eye of darkness for me, alright."

" sure" I replied.

he walked forward with something in his hand, he lifted it up and pressed it up against where my eye use to be. I could feel it attaching itself.

he said, " I would also like you to hold on to this sword to protect yourself. it absorbs darkness."

took it and then he pointed and said, there is a city in that direction. I swam in the direction he pointed. I eventually reached a town. I instantly noticed I could see dark thoughts, I could not turn them off, they all rushed into my brain like water to a valley, thoughts like I want to kill so and so, I want to steal from so and so, and I want to sleep with so and so. it was disgusting the dark thoughts surrounding me. then and there I knew I would go insane, and I was right.

shadows past

hello I am shadows dark side. I was allowed in celebration of the tenth chapter being written to use this chapter, to tell about shadow's and my past. you already heard about the boat, that was when I first woke up. The boat was a cruise ship, sea's parents were on the ship. I decided to wake up in the middle of the night. hahahahahaha, first thing I did was go down to the boiler room and break some pipes and other things. trying to cause a fire. I cause a medium fire down below. then I snapped some necks of any one near by me on my way to the kitchen. there I grabbed a knife, and started a fire in the kitchen. I then started towards the control center. I slashed apart the captain, and everyone else there. I turned the wheel so we were going north. Then I headed to the deck up there I grabbed a oil lamp and lit the deck on fire. I stayed there and killed anyone else on deck. including sea's parents, after I did a decent amount of damage I cut all the life boats, but one and lowered my life boat. then I fell asleep and drifted.

Alice's visit

Hello I am Alice. you first saw me in chapter 7 shadow's inner battle. I was the girl who ran out and blocked the attacks with my physic powers. after the battle I handed tomshibi a flask with a magic seal around the opening. that flask can collect water and purify it in an instant. I also left him a note because he was still frozen in fear at that time. the note explained how to use the flask to shoot out holy water. Then I went to shadow's place. he was still in the ventilation shaft. I headed through the door, down to the pub. I got attacked but I sliced the demon's to pieces with my powers. I told the bartender that I would like a room, to wait for a man that would come in about a day. I got the room then waited. you might be wondering how I knew all this, simply put I can see the future, the past, and the present at any location. so I waited in my room till the day after he arrived.

shadows trip part 2
I woke up, very early, I got up and opened my door. standing just outside of the door was a little girl.

"are you the girl who protected tomoshibi that night?" I asked.

"yes I am my name is Alice" she said.

"so are you my enemy?" I asked

"no I am not, because I know what you are planing, shadow. I know you are trying to make him stronger, and stronger. thus I will assist you, and you should know, that soon tomoshibi will be fighting an opponent that is harder then he can handle, alone. so we must hurry and get the sword and go to your school." she replied.

"alright that is good with me lets go" I said.

so we then headed down to the bar.

the bar tender said, " so he is the one you were waiting for, alright here is the path you were looking for"

the man stepped by a clock and it opened up, go on you got my approval. I walked ahead into the dark corridor, Alice walked just behind me. we went until we were at the border between shadow and fire. there was a gathering around the sword. it looked similar to king Arthur's Excalibur, but the sword was in a sheath, and when ever some one touched it they got burned by dark fire. apparently the darker you are, the more powerful the flames were and the less they burned you, but apparently your powers also had something to do with it. I got in line. every one before me got burned, and jumped back. I grabbed the hilt of the sword, flames erupted out of it. the flames were very dark, but they were not all that hot, they were like a spa's temperature. I yanked the sword out of the sheath it was a dark gray. I grabbed the sheath and created a belt for it. I then put the sword in the sheath. there was a large amount of complaints, one even tried to jump me. I pulled out my sword and burned his flesh away. I then walked back with Alice following just behind.

tomoshibi's battle against the darkness

I was sitting at my desk, when I heard a sound link metal shattering, then I heard wood cracking right above me everyone else quickly fled the room. In the chaos I managed to slip back behind them out of the crowd and then I made armor out of light. the hole soon was ripped open I launched my self out. There was dark and ijsje, of course I did not know that was who they were.

so I asked " who are you?"

dark replied "I am dark, and this is ice"

"what do you want?" I asked

"to kill you" he said.

then I whipped out the bottle of holy water that Alice gave me, and I activated it. a stream of water came pouring out, like a fire hose. he stepped to the right out of the blast. then I moved it more to the right. he came rushing foreword along side the stream. he was there one second gone the next, I felt a surge of pain a sword was in my body. I fell to the ground, my vision faded out.

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story contiued
shadow and dark

I was just running Alice was close behind me. we were heading to the school . when we got there I made a stair case out of shadow and I rushed up, Alice followed there was dark clouds over head of us. right when I got to the top tomoshibi fell on his face uncontentious. I then sent some dark fire towards dark. dark spun around and struck it with his sword. all the fire was absorbed into the sword. I blinked. my arm and sword were gone. he had my sword in his hands. the blade was pitch black. I started reforming my arm. he charged once again. I manged to reform my arm and to craft a sword. I barely moved the blade in front of his blade, but it did no good his blade, went straight through my blade like it was a cloud of mist. through my armor with the same resistance and chopped me in half. I thought am I going to die! am I going to die again. I don't want to die. I don't want. i don't want to die. I want to kill. the voice was not like normal, it was as though it was two voices. so let's kill! my helmet was turning to mist. dark was freaking out. I charged at him. I sliced off his arm and before he could react. I created ten spears of darkness and sent them at him. Ice who I just noticed, rushed in front of the spears. they stabbed into her flesh.

dark said, "thank you, ice. you saved me and killed your self. I am glad, I intended to kill you anyways. you mind was so disgusting. goodbye."

he then took his sword and ran it through her. she fell to the ground. I was amazed at his cruelty.

he said, "let's continue the fight!"

then I saw a white flame rush straight between us. I looked in the direction the flame came from and saw. tomoshibi, holding my sword. the blade of the sword was pure white.

dark said, " on second thought let's stop this fight now and continue it later."

He then disappeared.

tomoshibi then said, " as he said let's continue the fight later."

he threw the sword in my direction and left. I picked up the sword. Alice came to my side

she said, " tomorrow I will meet you at your gate."

then she too left, and then I headed off.

tomshibi wounded

hello, you are most likely wondering what happened to me after I got injured the wounds didn't just disappear like shadow's do. I tried to look quite impressive, but in reality I was very battered. I ended up going to the hospital to get my various wounds healed. when I got into the hospital, they asked me what happened, with a shocked expression. it seriously looked like I went through the blender. many bruises and cuts from the trip there. a gaping wound in my gut, and it turned out that I had several broken bones. I was hurt badly the doc said I should not get up for several days. oh and my answer to what happened to me was I got hit by a vehicle. the doctor was a bit skeptical, at my story. I told him I was on my way home, when a pick up truck filled with pipes hit me. I went over the back of the truck and got the wound in my gut from one of the pipes. that was the perfect chance to practice my lines for the school play that was coming up. the school was closed for awhile after the incident though. I was a bit afraid that I would not be powerful, enough to defeat shadow. not powerful enough to avenge sea. that was my greatest fear, but I lied put on a happy face and told jokes to myself, the doctors, and to my family who came to see me in the hospital for the second time in only a few days. that must have been hard for them, but we laughed it off. that is the kind of family we are. the kind that just laugh off are troubles. ha ha...

shadow learns earth
I was at my gate waiting for Alice to come. soon she got there.

I asked " what is this about"

she said " it is about evening the score between you and tomoshibi, he has mastery over light, electricity, and now has his holy water bottle I gave him. you have mastery over shadow, and have the dark fire sword. you are one element short so I came to teach you how darkness can have power over earth. to do so you must relies that there are shadows beneath the earth that can be controlled. i want you to control unseen shadows. that is what you are here to do. look around you there are shadows all around us underground. you may not realize that on the other side of this wall is shadows to. almost everywhere under ground there are shadows. there are a few places that there are not shadows, like in magma pools. so I want you to move the shadows behind this wall to break open this rock face."

I said " alright I will try."

I tried for quite a while trying to move earth, it took a while before I mastered it.

shadow, hears the story
I was practicing my powers, when Alice said, " come take a break. I have a story to tell." I went and sat down. " this is the story about what you have to do... it started*at the beginning of time, there were two*powerful beings, gods if that is what you want to*call them. one with*power to create light and one with the power to create dark. they were in a constant struggle for power. there fights created the universe, the stars and the darkness surrounding them, once when the battle was really heating up, the dark god created a concentrated ball of darkness and sent it at the god of light. the god of light matched his power and sent an attack. the collision created, the Grey king. the Grey king did not like the fighting, thus he knew he would have to intervene.*his only problem was a lack of strength. to make up for that he needed an army. he created humans*and the earth. the humans made*five discoveries, that*gave*the Grey king what he needed. the first was*the element earth that made up all things solid. the second was water that made*up all the liquids. the third was*air that made up all the gases. the fourth was fire,that made up*all of the worlds heat. the fifth was electricity, that*made up all the*electrons and protons. every thing was made of*light, dark*and the five elements. from the five elements the Grey king made five spheres. he gave each sphere to a warrior. the warriors then sealed up the gods of light and dark. the Grey king then gave the orbs the ability to open holes in space and time. he created a dimension for each one and hid them, so they would not be found by the servants of darkness and light, but he knew that the seals would wear off eventually. so he made them*open a gate*to the planet when they were needed. another of his problems is he was mortal, and thus could not live forever, to solve that problem he created the dimension for the souls of the dead to rest. the minions of light and dark flocked to that dimension to limit his movement. that they did successfully. so he created two blood lines who could use the powers of light and dark. they would retrieve the stones for him. the only problem was that the two blood lines could not control there powers very well. thus he created two crests that would help them control it. he then bestowed the crests when the time was right. those crests are your's, and Tomoshibi's now and the gates will soon open for you to seal off the dark god."

I nodded, some of it made sense some did not, but I nodded.

shadow's morning, the first orb gate opens
*
I was sleeping when I heard,wake up, wake up. my eyes open instantly. it came from the sphere.*
*
it said, " hurry get up!, the gate is opening, the gate to the first elemental orb."
*
I said " the first gate really? that*is*important! what should I do? where is it?"
*
it said " it's location is*still changing. it randomly opens, and closes till it*finds a safe location."
*
I asked " so what do*I do now wait, for it to think it is*safe?"
*
the orb*said, "*no, you seal your gate to limit the number of things that get out first. some still will get out though. so you*should*then go get the*warrior of light. I will tell you where you have to go. when it is done opening! now hurry!"
*
I ran to the gate I grabbed the thick wooden board, and put it on to lock the*door. I then grabbed the couch*and put it in font of the door. I*continued moving all my furniture in front of the door. then*I shrink wrapped the whole door and the furniture with some darkness.
*
I said, "that should hold for a while."
*
The orb said, "yes it should hold, now go get Tomoshibi to help.
*
I said " that's what I am going to do now" as I ran out the door.

The fire orbs forged
I was once called the gray king, some still call me by that name. I am here to tell you the story, of the fire orb. once upon a time there was a young man whose name was Arthur. you know of him as king Arthur, yes this is the story of king Arthur. I made king Arthur, a king. at that time I went by the name Merlin. I created the sword Excalibur, and my warrior of earth, formed a rock around it's tip. I then created the legend that if any one could pull the sword out of the stone they would be king. I found Arthur, and made him king by using darkness underneath the earth, to crack it just enough so that it would break. Arthur was then proclaimed king of the land. I then led him by the nose into doing deeds, that he thought were 'noble'. he did all those deeds, and his heart became very fiery. one day in* battle I stabbed him in the back and killed him, I regretted*it but I knew it was necessary, for I needed a warrior of fire to seal the two gods, and for that I needed a orb of fire. the only problem is that the fire, would melt the crystal used to seal it, so I needed a cool fire of immense power. I found that*the human soul was cool, but fiery, thus I used it to create the orb. I am very ashamed of it but it had to be done.

Ice still alive?!
I opened my eyes, I was in some strange place, it had plane white*walls made out of drywall. a wooden door opened.
" so your awake" said Alice.
*
"where am I, who are you?" I asked.
*
"I am Alice, I saw you get stabbed by dark. I know you don't mind the fact that he tried to killed you, I can read minds and see the future. You want to run back to him." said Alice.
*
"Yes I do want to I don't mind if he is going to kill me as long as I can be of use to him I am happy." I said.
*
" If you really want to help him you will stay and hear this plan." she said.
*
" I'm listening." I replied.

shadow and light fight
I was rushing over to Tomoshibi's place to get his help. the sun was rising. I went into Tomoshibi's room. he was awake.
*
"what do you want?, you want to fight?!" He said.
*
" no I want your help." I said.
*
" well I want a fight. a final fight to confirm what I believe, if you win I will help you." he replied
*
"where at?" I asked
*
"where our first fight was." he said.
*
"OK lets go" I said.
*
we ran at top speed. to our first battle ground. once there he used his holy water on me. I dodged and then sent dark fire after him. he blocked it with a wall of light. the light to both our surprise burnt black slowly. he summoned a sword of light and charged at me. I blocked with a piece of the ceiling. he sent blades of light flying through my wall. I threw a ball of darkness at him.* he blocked it with a plate of light , but what I manged to do succeed I got him a good distance away. I then* sliced off the corner of the building he was on. he ran and jumped into the building. he then called down a pillar of light. I summoned shadow form beneath me to form a force field. I fell and went skidding into the building. spears of light started stabbing through the floor. I managed to out run them. I jumped on to the stair case and made the stairs fall. I fell down to the floor below him. I then sent a crescent shadow slicing through the ceiling. Tomoshibi came falling down. he gathered electricity from the wires in the broken ceiling, and sent a lighting bolt. I dived towards the wall of the hallway and turned to shadow. I easily sliped through the pores in the wall. I heard the some of the building crashing down. I created a large ball of*shadows and sent it flying into the hallway.*it went smashing through out of the building. I entered the hall and looked both ways he was not*there I ran to the*end of the hole to look and*see if he died. my leg turned to shadow. I looked down to see Tomoshibi*standing on the wall of the building. he had*a*sword of light he*had sliced off my leg.*I then* slice off the section of building we were on.* we fell I summoned a dark chain to connect the building section to another building. we went swing into the building. Tomoshibi broke the wall with a shield of light. at that point in time I noticed that my armor was turning to smoke. I heared my other self speaking.
*
"you most likely noticed that the darkness is dissolving in the light. I will finish this quickly so we can get out of the light." he said.
*
" I don't want to kill him so I will handle this myself so don't interfere." I thought to him.
*
I*jumped into the building,* he followed we were in a hotel. shot a ball of light, I ducked. I climbed down the stairs. He threw spears. I wanted to get lower closer to the earth so we could get to my element. darkness.* He threw a ball of light from above. it hit me and I went smashing through the stairs. I was at the bottom floor. He threw another one the blast knocked me through the wall into a pool. the pool was still closed it was dark I felt safe. he ran in and turned on the lights. he pulled out his bottle of holy water and started to spray it into the pool. the water was purifying. my armor was smoking, and the only darkness left was myself and my armor. I turned my armor into smoke, concentrated it and launched my self out of the pool.
*
"so that is you sea?" he asked.
*
" yes it is me" I replied.
*
" so you need help with something" Tomoshibi said.
*
" Yeah* but first I should explain the whole thing" I said.
*
and that is what I did I explained everything to him that happened.

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