[girlyblack]

Originally Posted by Nyx

Well...Almost all my poems ..Are romantic .. It's not my fault that i'm a Teenage
It's the longest one that i made so far...
I'm good in english ..But i believe the poem have some mistakes .. So ..Don't be harsh with me guys ..When you judge at it :p
It's like a conversation one .. BTW ..Sorry for making it too long and boring one & Please ..it's not that good for whom under 18 >>Like she's 18 one :p

~The Attraction of The Young Man~

I had found a young man...Sleeping in the forest having some REST.
I couldn't distract my eyes from him ...Was almost like a pretty cute baby but what i most prefered on him was his sexy CRUST.
Cause i was too close from him... He awaked and the first thing that he saw was my BREAST.
Him: hi there, what's the problem?...I answered him: it just having a man like you is the BEST.
He didn't get what my meaning was so i said:... sorry for annoying you if you want me to go i won't mind to disappear like a GUST.
Him: no it's ok even that i couldn't understood you... But at least can i invite you to my house as a GUEST?.
Me: OMG,thanks a lot nice from you to do that...I'll try to keep my desire even after the sun SET.
I saw lots of question marks above his head, me:how about talkin about you....Where are you from? Him: I'm from greece it's in the mid EAST.
Me: no kiddin, your look is so calm quite beautiful & gorgeous personality kinda like whom from the WEST.
Him: Babe don't overrate with me, and why do you say such things?...Me: it just i couldn't find your character in one man from my LIST.
He laughed, laughed loudly he was extremely gorgeous...For me i smiled but also my desire controled at me so i hugged him to my CHEST.
He surprised from doing me this But he turned his arms around me and hugged me tightly...Him: Dear how about sharing and TEST?


There's still more ..But i'm tired now ..So i will complete it later

wow its an awesome story.... i think the guy likes the girl also... i'm looking forward to the continuation.... you've got a talent darli'n... keep it up... i'm also a person like to write a poem... if you want i can lend you one of my poems.... if its okay to you...