Not bad at all. I saw a couple of spots that could use a little work, but this really isn't all that bad.
The time to die isn't decided by man, it is decided by powers greater than man can comprehend.
Atra esterni ono thelduin, Mor'ranr lifa unin hjarta onr, Un du evarinya ono varda.
May good fortune rule over you, Peace live in your heart, And the stars watch over you
Atra gulia un ilian tauthr ono un atra ono waise skoliro fra rauthr.
May luck and happiness follow you and may you be shielded from misfortune
Which Final Fantasy Character Are You?