lol Jyuu-kun... ur works are definitely getting better (^^,)... i've been out for some time and i find this haha lol... your works are nice...and no need to compare yourself with the others...
君の腕の中 あたたかいよ 僕は言えるかな
It's warm in your arms; I wonder if I can say it
弱さを 今 翼に変えて
I'll change weakness into wings now
"Good bye, yesterday"