heard
 

Your the adult
I'm the child
Your the elder
and I'm the young

You may speak
While I have no say
You are known
While I'm unheard

But in time that will change
In time I will be heard
And you will have to listen

You are the adult
And I'm the child
But in time I will be the adult
And you will be the elder

I will be heard
And you will be forgotten
My time will come
When yours is gone

In time you will die
And I will be elder
In time the next young will rise and be heard

By the hour in day
I will be forgotten
and the next young will be heard

And by that dayin life I shall understand
You will be gone and so shall I be too
Before I am I may question
"Are you proud of?" "Can you hear me"

Within that time we shall be gone
And leave the world to the next generation
To the kings and queens that may be unheard now
But will lead the countries later

Quite lovely dear :kawaii:

thank you im glad you seem to have enjoyed it

Yes I did. I actually write myself....But I'm still trying to fix it up before I post it.

yea thats understandabile

nice poem. I like this part
"I will be heard
And you will be forgotten
My time will come
When yours is gone"

thank you im glad you like it

great stuff man,
share some more,
when time is right.

wish i could post stuff i write, but either i will be banned or labeled as absolutely insane and unsociable weirdo :D it's not that its rude or antisocial but the other weird :P

so i just read other peoples stuff and give it a thought.
and my thought likes your creation^^

i see well thanks