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JessaBaby 12-01-2009 08:11 PM

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My heart stops
I can hear the people around me
The voices are like soft kisses on my skin
I'm here
Yet not
For here
Is me
And in me
Is darkness
Yet I'm still in touch
Here in the darkness
I scream and scream
Please hear me scream...
Why can't anyone hear me scream
Why am I left in the dark
Alone
Then I feel a warm hand on my shoulder
My hear restarts
"Take my hand"
And I'm alive again
The darkness is no more

My mother ask me to write this for her. The outline for it is a spiritual one so just interpret how ever you will. Not my best but whatever :P

Zero Ichi 12-01-2009 11:02 PM

its still a good one and nice to see you post again! :happy:

JessaBaby 12-02-2009 01:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zero Ichi (Post 200815)
its still a good one and nice to see you post again! :happy:

Lol Ya school has been killer on me so I've been writing less and less and it's starting to bug me so I wanted to post something for the people who read my work

black13 12-11-2009 11:52 AM

cool!!! XD

PUPPETDOLL 12-11-2009 02:37 PM

that is so good i love it

xeous 04-24-2010 12:01 PM

So your a poet also?


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