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BLOODROSE

10-20-2009 09:39 PM

If you seen the pain what would you do...?

..........

gunslinger

10-22-2009 04:36 PM

i hope its like elfen lied.

or like impulse its a book i read its was awsome.

suigintou

10-22-2009 07:30 PM

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I'm sorry, but if you're going to put something in this board, make it so we can actually read it. Right now it's just a jumbled mess of some nonsense about pain and suffering, and we can't even tell what the hell it is.

Bobadoe

10-22-2009 08:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by suigintou (Post 197880)

*nods along*

Proper sentence structure goes a long way in getting a point across.

xpaperjack

10-23-2009 05:15 AM

I mildly agree with the two about me, throw in some commas & periods.
but I still understood it.

and yeah! dude, it totally reminds me of this girl named Vanessa from Impulse by Ellen Hopkins.

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