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AkiTorrien 10-09-2009 02:12 AM

Loving You
 
(Just a short poem I wrote just now <3)

Hold me close tonight
and tell me that you love me.
Wrap your arms around me
and hold me tight to you.
Take my hand
and kiss my lips
Whisper how much I mean to you.
Lift me up
and spin me around
make me laugh and smile.

I cry when you are gone
not because I am sad
but because I miss you.

But then I smile,
for I know
you will be back again real soon.

You love me
and I love you
and that will never change.

D.C. 10-09-2009 04:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AkiTorrien (Post 197026)
(Just a short poem I wrote just now <3)

Hold me close tonight
and tell me that you love me.
Wrap your arms around me
and hold me tight to you.
Take my hand
and kiss my lips
Whisper how much I mean to you.
Lift me up
and spin me around
make me laugh and smile.

I cry when you are gone
not because I am sad
but because I miss you.

But then I smile,
for I know
you will be back again real soon.

You love me
and I love you
and that will never change.


HI thanx like it ::D:

Zero Ichi 10-09-2009 04:40 AM

this was pretty, whoever you are and whoever that someone is, i must say im envious to see such devotion!

i really hope i can get back to those moments!

AkiTorrien 10-09-2009 04:43 AM

Awwwwww ^_^ Thank you For the comment.

Zero Ichi 10-09-2009 04:45 AM

your most welcome, just keep up the good work, in writing and in love, as well, promise?

AkiTorrien 10-09-2009 05:07 AM

Of course I will promise ^^ The poem is dedicated to my boyfriend.

Bobadoe 10-09-2009 06:03 AM

Title made me think of the song by the same name.... *shiver*

And.... Awww... Such loving devotion.... It is nice to see happiness in other people.

*double thumbs up*

giovanni r 10-09-2009 11:32 AM

Wow Aki thats really really good!!!!!!! It makes me wanna cry with happiness and sadness!!!

Qoax 04-09-2010 02:14 PM

It was really cute ^^ Keep up the good work ^^


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