Her's forever
 

She holds my heart
Her hands gripping tighter
I can't escape
For she owns me
And loves me
But scares me
For she scars me
And I scream
Silently
But I love her back anyways
Her Doll
Till the end
Never an escape

there some deep feelings behind this one, i can see it, another good one Jessa, im beginning to love your poems, like alot! hahah

Lol thank you very much!

it was ok

But scares me
For she scars me

but this part seems repetitive and could be fixed

haaha your welcome, Jessa!

but how is it repetitive? not really seein it to be honest

just the way that in the poem it is said and the practically said again

but scares and scars are two different things, i think it was very well done, you almost always need a reason for every feeling exposed in a poem, at least for these kind of poems

oh, whoops, I guess I missed the difference and I thought they where the same word, now that I notice that it is somewhat better.

Thank you for the opinions guys