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Kenetic 09-15-2009 03:10 AM

Unending Suffering
 
Made it a while ago, thought I'd toss it in here.

Destroyed from within
Decayed from without,
for nil is our life
suffering, the infinite loop

Forever we know the source
scouring it upon ourselves
unable to rid it
of unyielding horror

Contained with no boundary
stopping here but never
we pity the souls,
those suffering sin.

Never in sight
the end never nigh,
upon the great break
which we hold to the truth.

For one day we vanquish,
that sadness from our path
to be replaced by the suffering
of countless worlds past.

Caster9301 09-15-2009 05:00 PM

omg, that's pretty tight, how long did it take ya? Just a sorta scrawled out thing? Or a lot of serious thought? Lol, and, just btw, I'm gonna start writing a zombie novel! It's gonna be wicked, ^^,

Kenetic 09-19-2009 06:09 PM

Wrote it in class during a lecture on romanticism lol


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