Beauty amongst the ashes
 

hahaha i found this just a few mins ago, i think i wrote it when i was 14-15, somewhere around there, but i still kinda like it, not great but not completely horrible, god i was an angsty teenager, hahahahaha...i also cannot remember for who or why i wrote this....oh well, whatcha think of my early work?

What is the world and its inhabitants turning out to be?
Just another tragedy mounted on another to me.
Everyone is starting to have this certain fate.
Like everthing in this world, drowning in its dismal state.
Even the one I love is stuck to that fate unable to become unfast.
Yet I'm still drawn to her, I will hold her in the end, at last.
I can help free her, spread her wings in beauty.
Instead of learning the trade of this unfair world's deformity.
She may have past sins that have made me look away.
But i simply love her too much to leave her astray.
This world is disgusting, theres no way I'm leaving her alone.
I will take her hand and lead her among the blind fools who must atone.

You are a hopeless romantic.... Not bad at all...

8/10

hahaha thank you very much!
it gives me a feeling of nostalgia, still cant remember for whom the poem was for though.... :\

Oooooo..... That is funny as hell.....*laughs out loud... really*

who was it for... so much love..???