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starscream 07-20-2009 10:47 PM

"life"
 
"LIFE"


When I was a child,
like most children I was afriad of the dark.
As I grew I learned not to fear it,
for now I live in it.
Hiding from those closest to me
my true self and beliefs.
We all do.
We walk in the shadows never
fully stepping into the light.
Some people believe they
are in the light.
What they don't realize
is that their belief
that as christians their
true place is to be next to God,
and to be seperated is punishment.
That the beautiful gift known as life
is then actually the punishment known
as Hell.
Knowing where I am
and knowing what awaits
How can I not be comfertable in the darkness?
My life started in darkness
as all ours have,
and in the end
I will be greated again
by that same darkness.
It's arms opened
Like an old friend.
For in truth we have walked
side by side through this Hell
called LIFE.

ricecake 07-20-2009 11:14 PM

I really like this one a lot star!!! Keep them coming

Utauh 07-20-2009 11:16 PM

yeah me too, it's really good :]

starscream 07-24-2009 09:50 PM

Thank you guys.

Starfire 07-25-2009 07:27 AM

Sounds like my poem, Heaven, Hell, Humanity. Good job.

Luna_ 01-03-2010 01:39 AM

that WAS dark.

GiGi22337 01-08-2010 08:27 PM

that's really good ^^

toya 04-12-2010 05:05 PM

i really liked that one >.< oh and we fear whats inside the dark not dark itself... keep them coming!!!!


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