Wishing you Still Loved Me
 

Ok so I was just wondering what people thought of this poem:

I'm in agony and pain

Missing you everday

Wishing i could kiss you in the rain

On this day I still remember

Everyday we spent together

Once you left it was like I was dismembered

I sit awake each night wondering what happened

I don't know what was wrong

I'm trapped in this endless wind

And now you're taken

This is an endless nightmare

I just want I could awaken

that was really good. you did a great job. hope to read more by you ^_^

Thank you!!
I've been expressing myself wth my writing so more will be out shortly ^-^