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Fox Girl 03-15-2009 01:11 AM

Next Part of Fox Girl Story
 
She said, “I am glad you like it, dearly. Someday I will come back and see you. I am off to other towns to give some hope and joy to others.”
She moved the cart off and she was gone. Maelyn was not sure what to say or do, but she went back to work in the Queen’s garden. Nothing happened to Maelyn.
The evil witch went to the castle to see Prince Sky. He was in his room at the time working on some homework. She changed into Maelyn and went into the room. He of course was surprised but asked her to come in. She sat on his bed and held his hands. She gave him a bottle and he drank it. Then the evil witch gave him a kiss and went off.
The next day there was a big change for Maelyn and Prince Sky. Prince Sky was not feeling good for awhile. His face turned as white as snow and then back to the normal color. His heart started to hurt pretty badly but then it was fine. He felt different and didn’t know what to say. Most of the day he was in his bed and his mother had called the doctor to help him out. They didn’t know he was turning bad and that he would leave before the doctor had come. Maelyn’s parents showed up out of the blue. Maelyn’s mother asked the Queen if she knew where her daughter was. She said that they didn’t see her come back one she left to wash her face. The Queen was surprised and said that she didn’t know where Maelyn was and that her son was acting weird. Prince Sky overheard them and went out the window. He didn’t know where he was going, but just kept running until he saw a man named Darken Sky.
Darken Sky said, “Hello! It seems like you are lost. I can help you out with anything.”
Prince Sky didn’t know what to do but followed Darken Sky to his home. He showed him his rooms and standing there was Black Witch. She smiled and showed him where his room was. He lay on the bed that was really soft and fell asleep. The last thing on this mind was Maelyn. Then Darken Sky looked at Black Witch and talked for a bit. They had to keep an eye on their new friend.
As for Maelyn, her day was going badly. She went to the river to wash up, but when she saw her refection she was upset. What she saw were two fox ears and lovely fox tail. She ran away from her home because she didn’t want to show her parents what she looked like. She ran into the forest farther and found a log. Then she sat down on the log and started to cry. Maelyn looked up after crying and saw a white glowing light. At first she couldn’t see anything but the glowing light, but really, it was a beautiful lady dressed in white. Her hair was all white and wavy, her dress was like a winter rose, and her wings were made of nice silk. She rode a cloud so you never see her feet, and she held a scepter known as The Angel of Truth. She looked into Maelyn’s eyes and saw sadness. She laid her hand on Maelyn’s face and smiled sweetly. Maelyn seemed to calm down and relax.

This is the next part of the story. Enjoy and I will put up later! Fox Girl :cute:

namiti 03-15-2009 01:24 AM

lol awsome story rely awsome!!:lightsaber::cheerleader::hands:

Fox Girl 03-15-2009 02:39 AM

Thanks so much! XD

ricecake 03-15-2009 02:51 AM

part two was great! when are you putting out part three (^_^)

Fox Girl 03-15-2009 03:01 AM

Soon...I might put it on tomorrow..I want people to read and get more excited so they can't wait for the next one. XD

AnimeAlice 03-15-2009 03:42 AM

wow! didn't see that coming! xD good story!

Fox Girl 03-15-2009 04:27 AM

Thanks Alice..glad you like it! ^^

-.Shiki.- 03-15-2009 11:10 PM

More I need more!!
Really, I can't wait for the next part =D=D *jumps*


rep+ for this ^^

Fox Girl 03-15-2009 11:59 PM

Come down Shiki...you will get more of the story soon. ^^

Gin86 03-16-2009 12:05 AM

that was good too


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