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Dany 03-11-2009 09:16 AM

One Of My Poems
 
http://www.animefuel.com/forum/showthread.php?t=12316 In darkness

http://www.animefuel.com/forum/showthread.php?t=12315 Assassins in the night

http://www.animefuel.com/forum/showthread.php?t=12314 The dark angel

http://www.animefuel.com/forum/showthread.php?t=12313 Sinners

i WRITE POEMS BUT I DON'T HAVE MANY


the crowed is walking in the rain
from my view they are looking like a sea of souls
i am just a viewer in that sea
the sky is crying for that hungry hearts
i hear a sad melody
like a whisper in the wind
a whisper of their thoughts
that are thoights of hope?or wasted dreams?
that i will never know
i am just a stranger in the rain
a lonely stranger with no hope and dreams.


I walk a desert road
An infinite one,without past and future
I feel upon my skin;
The cold touch of the night
I am all alone on this dark path
And i turn back and see you
I smile but you dont answer me
Between us is a deep abyss
I am losing your face in the mist
Happines was not given to me
Only loneliness and sadness
I turn.....losing myselfin the dark night
In the heavy mist
Hoping at that place of my own

Vashvvv 03-28-2009 01:18 AM

Nice i feel the lonelyness and isolation too well done

Memorix 03-28-2009 02:34 AM

These are really good... in an odd way...


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