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Ariya 02-27-2008 01:18 AM

Murderous Angel
 
Inside this woeful prison, knowing all is lost,
Seeking nothing, hoping all, lying in disgust,
Those bright black eyes, that loathsome figure,
Why, oh why, do you make me whimper?
STRIKE!

It all goes dark, I cannot see, is that you touching me?
Inside my head, inside my thoughts, the inner core of my shots,
Help me; help me, through and through,
Help me, please I beg of you!
STRIKE!

All you do is laugh horridly in my face,
Don’t you know I loved you?
Am I a disgrace?
No, no perish the thought,
I’m here, not lying to rot.
STRIKE!

Is that your head on one side of the ground?
Is that your body coming around?
Who is laughing now? I see your worthless, no value at all,
Now tell me, can you hear my call?
Of course you can’t, for you are dead,
Hah! My love for you is ever so dull!
STRIKE!

Think once, think twice, oh heck even think thrice!
But know that whatever you pull, I’ll release ten fold on you!
So come at me, you Devilish thing,
See who I am, I am the Angels’ Wing,
Sing, sing, and praise me!
For an Angel has just murdered thee.
S-T-R-I-K-E!!!!

leerock89 02-27-2008 01:20 AM

nice one ariya. i like how it was like an upwards spiral(kinda).

Ariya 02-27-2008 01:22 AM

Thank you~

silkshadow 02-27-2008 02:12 AM

yeah now no complaints about this one its great


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