I need opinions!

[ylaixVK]

Well, I'm writing my story. BUT I want to change the title, because I really find the current one UNAPPEALING.

Since, I forgot to post details.
I've been very on and off about how my story plots are. So, what I've concluded to is this:

The chars starts off as vampires, and with each passing year, they eventually evolve into humans or whatever they need to adapt to their daily lives. Each adventure they go on, reveals a little more about theie life/history/past.

There are many secrets to each char. Although they may be vampires, they can do so much more.

So, I've compiled a list, and a poll, hoping to see which one is MOST appealing.

Please vote & I appreciate every last bit.

Distorted Thoughts of Addiction
The Domain of Outset Prayers
The Elocution of the Arcanum
Laws of Cadence
Forlor Malediction
Indelible Invocation

[fejknick]

Distorted Thoughts of Addiction hands down.

[quietchat]

It's kinda hard to pick a title without knowing the story.

[momji_2]

yeah...wat is the story about anyway...because these titles are kinda weird

[ylaixVK]

vampires are main chars. There are various adventures.

[quietchat]

Well, none of your titles relate to vampires or adventures...

[fejknick]

Well, none of your titles relate to vampires or adventures...

Distorted Thoughts of Addiction, the urge for blood. ;)

[xXWENWENXx]

Disorted thoughts of addiction because that's the only title that i understand.

[SmokedBoo]

I'm with fejknick on that one. Uh, where are you posting your story at? I'd like to R/R it fer ya!

[meraychan]

i'll go 4 distorted thoughts of addiction...

[xJumpJetx]

likewise, id go for the distorted thoughts of addiction since its the only thing i understand among the list.

i say, when making a title, make it understandable. (*yes i can see you're making it eye-catchy, but it's too "high-level" for normal people. There's always a way of making a title eye catchy without using extreme words. lol)

[suune]

They all sound good!

[animex09]

give some info about the story. It will make it a lot easier to pick a tittle.

[strike7785]

Vampires= Addiction for Blood and Sex

[ylaixVK]

the story contains a lot of different adventures. >_< kind of like goosebumps. Each adventure reveals a little more about each chars history.

It's posted here
Freewebs.com/ittykittyxylaitm

[salmeria]

i liked the sound of "The Domain of Outset Prayers"...an i dont even know what it means but yeah it sounds cool ^^

[ylaixVK]

I apologize for such complex words.

[Russkie]

Damn teenagers and their damn vampire crap...

Space Marines are cooler.

[animex09]

Damn teenagers and their damn vampire crap...

Space Marines are cooler.

though I don't agree with the 'space marines' thing, I do agree that vampires suck...no offense

[Champbryce]

Distorted Thoughts of Addiction ????

[libitina]

good luck on ur story!!!!! it sounds really great!!!

[Nightmare]

that firs one. Oh and only the heavely romanticised vampires suck. Why I remember back in the day the mere mention of the word vampire would make even the bravest brake into a cold sweet.

[ylaixVK]

good luck on ur story!!!!! it sounds really great!!!


Thank you(=

[Vakarak]

Distorted Thoughts of Addiction - sounds like pensive people with life problems.
The Domain of Outset Prayers - sounds like people that hope a lot
The Elocution of the Arcanum - sounds magical
Laws of Cadence - ...
Forlor Malediction -have no clue what that could mean
Idelible Invocation -don't know if you spelt it right but this has a very seductive ring to it as these aren't everyday words...
like the story has a lot of twists and so on....

But I shall go with "Distorted Thoughts of Addiction" matches perfectly with the synopsis you gave us.

[ylaixVK]

Distorted Thoughts of Addiction - sounds like pensive people with life problems.
The Domain of Outset Prayers - sounds like people that hope a lot
The Elocution of the Arcanum - sounds magical
Laws of Cadence - ...
Forlor Malediction -have no clue what that could mean
Idelible Invocation -don't know if you spelt it right but this has a very seductive ring to it as these aren't everyday words...
like the story has a lot of twists and so on....

But I shall go with "Distorted Thoughts of Addiction" matches perfectly with the synopsis you gave us.


These are really good descriptions.

[C0nspiracy]

Laws of Pseudo Existence!!!!!!!!!

[atomsk]

hmm how bout decay of immortals

vamps are immortal and their turning human you could even turn it into a conflict of the story

[ylaixVK]

hmm how bout decay of immortals

vamps are immortal and their turning human you could even turn it into a conflict of the story

Well, I could you use that as a sub title. (not the caption kind)
I'll take it consideration though. Thank you!

[saprintha]

the first one sound interesting.

[wzombie6th]

I voted for Distorted Thoughts of Addiction since it seemed to have a closer meaning to the story than the others off the bat. I also liked Laws of Cadence because it caught my attention I'd pick it up to see what its about just for that.

[Nightmare]

well I liked them all really. good luck.

[ylaixVK]

well I liked them all really. good luck.

Thanks much! I have a feeling that Distorted Thoughts of Addictions is going to be there for sure. So i might go with that.

[carolyn07]

It's kinda hard to pick a title without knowing the story.


...true!,.♥

[Mugen]

Idelible Invocation