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Neophoenix
12-06-2008, 01:03 PM
Longing for your touch on my'n I wait for you but you slip away further and further, Until I can no longer follow a feeling of being shuned shivers threw my body I miss you I want you to come back , But a evil has fallen apon you every moment were not together makes me dobute my myself only time will tell if you ever return from the darkness but I shall be waiting with open arms.

Come to me my love.

Neoliger
12-06-2008, 02:37 PM
It's good pho

Waste
12-06-2008, 02:44 PM
It's easy to write about hate and darkness and love, but harder to make it mean something.

Neophoenix
12-06-2008, 03:05 PM
it is true about a girl I like

Neophoenix
12-06-2008, 08:52 PM
it was a girl named Heather

fejknick
12-06-2008, 08:54 PM
You do know there is a EDIT button.... right?

Try to press the return button sometimes.

Neophoenix
02-04-2009, 06:52 PM
yes I know there is a DAMN EDIT Button do I like a guy who dosn't know about the edit button